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33. "Lesson 6 (only one this week): The Push Through"
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*created by Baltimore writer, Chris August.

The push through is a 100 syllable, 10 line poem (which equates to 10 lines of 10 syllables each line).

The first syllable of the first line (syllable, NOT word), has to be used at least ONCE per line all the way through to the end (thusly pushing it through the piece).

I would have an example, but he hasn't provided one yet as he's still trying to write his first push through (ironic, right?).

The theory behind it is cool, and most definitely challenging, so I'd love at least one of us to get this form tried (and done well too).

An added challenge (and it's still being discussed w/ the creator): use the syllable chronologically. In other words, the first syllable becomes the second syllable of the next line; third syllable of the third line, and so on (I think that's where he was going with this, but forgot to tell me).

Good luck. I'll be working on mine tonight.

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April COTM: National Poetry Month Lessons - Yr 3 [View all] , delrica, Tue Apr-06-04 04:01 AM
 
Subject Author Message Date ID
COTM Comments/Suggestions Go under THIS THREAD
Apr 06th 2004
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RE: COTM Comments/Suggestions Go under THIS THREAD
Apr 06th 2004
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      i didn't know
Apr 06th 2004
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           LMAO
Apr 06th 2004
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           i'm lookin for extra credict.....
Apr 06th 2004
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Lesson 1: The Deux Langue
Apr 06th 2004
2
RE: Lesson 1: The Deux Langue
Apr 06th 2004
6
RE: Lesson 1: The Deux Langue
Apr 06th 2004
7
co-sign
Apr 06th 2004
8
RE: Lesson 1: The Deux Langue
Apr 06th 2004
11
RE: Lesson 1: The Deux Langue
Apr 18th 2004
32
RE: April COTM: National Poetry Month Lessons - Yr 3
Apr 06th 2004
10
potential.
Apr 06th 2004
12
Ok...One Mo' 'Gin
Apr 07th 2004
13
Lesson 2: The Skinny
Apr 07th 2004
14
RE: Lesson 2: The Skinny
Apr 07th 2004
15
Running
Apr 08th 2004
17
for John
Apr 16th 2004
31
Lesson 3: The Bop
Apr 08th 2004
16
Lesson 04: The Eintou - Revisited
Apr 09th 2004
18
complexion II
Apr 11th 2004
19
this piece stands alone...
Apr 11th 2004
20
miles davis.
Apr 11th 2004
21
ahh... yeah... this one.
Apr 12th 2004
23
RE: miles davis.
Apr 15th 2004
30
RE: Lesson 04: The Eintou - Revisited
Apr 14th 2004
27
RE: Lesson 04: The Eintou - Revisited
Apr 14th 2004
28
      dope
Apr 14th 2004
29
Lesson 5: Tetractys - Revisited
Apr 12th 2004
22
deprivation
Apr 12th 2004
24
RE: Lesson 5: Tetractys - Revisited
Apr 14th 2004
26
Erm...no lesson today.
Apr 13th 2004
25

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