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ric: wordplay = nice. i like that shyt. "Return of the king, slay tek like an orc village, This dork bitdditch lacks the torque to import skill-age" = hot "the semis was the finals, u just my victory lap" = good braggin'. "my balls big, u show nerfs," = haHA, i get it, like a pun, right? "I’ll aim for the middle then, tek couldn’t ADD if he inhaled a sack of Ritalin, u shootin blanks, let me fill em in," = hot fiyah "classic ric versus classic tek…theres a classic tek? no contest…I'm best, *knights tek for a win so effort-less*" = i just like that line.
it was kinda like you really were rhymin' kinda sans effort. plus it wasn't homo an' shyt. and you don't wait so long
tek: "We're gambling, your line against mine, but who has the hotter hand?/ Well, yours is creamed and frustrated, frictioned and baited/" = haHAA. jack off jokes. "remember when you thought you lost to Ax?/ "Tek, I quit! I retire! I can't take this rap!!!"/ Kid, what the fuck! how you gonna cry, retire, and attempt comeback's?/" = ooooooooooooooh "Oh Rick! Please be my friend! Teach me how to suck my own cock like you do on and off again?/" = kinda homo "Come serious, or stay flat like 'Silence.Wav' feedback!/" = i laughed out loud. "You can't protect ya neck, we fuck'd and I left you burned like gonorrhea/" = kinda homo "I'll fuck you from the front and curve my dick, you can pretend I'm a swan, and you're the ugly bitch!/" = sayin' bytch at the end, don't make it less homo
i kinda like that shyt, other than those homarks (homo remarks, patented). but it seems like you right a lot of stuff while you tryin' to think of another hot line. it's too far in between 'em. if you maybe took away some of that filler, it might come across better.
nod to ric.
yeah . . . i know
the Signature starts now:
yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.
the group is the ILLIANCE.
the url is www.illiancerecords.com. /\free music is there, an' a forum/\
buy the album.
support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.
oh, an' somebody said that this was sig worthy, so, here it is: "i like some of his music. i just don't like the idea of him being a marketing ploy to get me to waste perfectly good backpack money on a rocafella cd."
fuckers
war
outro
the Signature starts now:
yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.
the group is the ILLIANCE.
the url is www.illiancerecords.com. /\free music is there, an' a forum/\
buy the album.
support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.
oh, an' somebody sa
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