i like the title. photo, nice middle -- the compactness of it and the way it builds into g's ending section. i'm a little confused by this part, g:

"Doubts fly kites
birds fly right and
keys dangle

Clouds gather
heat squeezes
synergy beckons

reckonings breathe and
singularities whistle
through the lungs of
nature's ghetto"

is it possible to get a breakdown, especially on the last section?

peace,

n.

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