sometimes, there is no joy in repetition. in other words...lose some of your it's about...we already know that's the name of the piece, maybe stress the particular phrase all of three times throughout. otherwise, i liked the things recalled, especially breaking the "toy" *wink*
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My first chapbook: "This Chapbook Was Made With Pilfered Office Products" available now - $6.00
My 2nd chapbook, coming in 2007: "Orgasms and Ice Cream"