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10. "Are you listening, My Son? (in your own words...)"
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To my son... (zin)
I bared you to the world (Nathaniel)
and planned to exist in (zin)
endless fields of dreams, (k0la)
watching sunrise from mountains range (Asiem)
& vast rivers along which honey flows (k0la)
for the you that lives in my eye (delsbrothergeorge)

but how shallow i was (moenay)

from the beginning of creation, (HavoK07)
from the very start (HavoK07)
here on earth, (UncleClimax)
the tree that grows where the ground once opened (delsbrothergeorge)
its beauty has been neglected (UncleClimax)

in this same location, (tremahne)
once upon a time, slaves were sold. (k0la)
And now my soul re-lives the flash backs (Chaste_Souls)

this is the decadent land where (k0la)
my voice is an unheard neanderthal grunt (jayare214)
behind the hands, that penned books so potent (jayare214)
they were torched, (jayare214)
a glass of kerosene and lit a match. (otto)
crackle like bent leaves fallen (gsquared)

From the rich born to the street, (Black Tongue)
All sides have blood on their hands by default (tremahne)
hidden behind the walls of wealth (HavoK07)
Where the depraved hide their filth (Knowone)
With perfect smiles, picket fences, and neatly trimmed hedges, (Knowone)
For it’s a snow globe existence we live in (gypsyojos)

Poisoned by this hate filled world (CarNaVor)
we're growing up just to kill and fight. (CarNaVor)
the weapons of warfare (UncleClimax)
sparks all with tinges of paranoia (k_rockah)

To my son... (zin)
life is a knife serrated with jaded teeth (MiracleRic)
Your smiles will turn to tears (gypsyojos)
moments manifest into years, (gypsyojos)

someone like you, (Morehouse)
a dream, creeping into the real, (Morehouse)
I bared you to the world (Nathaniel)
The world and its chloroform around your nostrils (k_rockah)
my arms lay scarred and outstretched (3rd i)
because your life means more to me, (robynwildchild)
loss of all my blood is nothing (robynwildchild)
my redemption means nothing (RatpackSlim)
if i can't pass on the lesson (RatpackSlim)

To my son... (zin)
u must listen... (truth)
a beacon of freedom is a street lamp (MCEsher)
to change the world, (delrica)
You can pierce the sky (UncleClimax)
give life with your sword (UncleClimax)
and inspire no cries of agony (UncleClimax)

I hope you got a good poker face (zin)
showing the limitless potential of where the mind can reach. (jayare214)

To my son... (zin)
I bared you to the world (Nathaniel)

are u listening? (truth)





___________________________
-Phyllis-




...The caged bird sings
with fearful trill
of the things unknown
but longed for still
and is tune is heard
on the distant hill
for the caged bird
sings of freedom...

- Maya Angelou

  

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March COTM: In Your Own Words..... [View all] , KnowOne, Sun Feb-29-04 07:32 PM
 
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In Your Own Words (EXAMPLE)
Feb 29th 2004
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RE: In Your Own Words (EXAMPLE)
Feb 29th 2004
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yup....
Mar 01st 2004
3
      RE: yup....
Mar 02nd 2004
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WoW! Very
Mar 02nd 2004
9
Question
Mar 01st 2004
4
hmm.....
Mar 01st 2004
6
RE: March COTM: In Your Own Words.....
Mar 01st 2004
5
i'm famous...lol..
Mar 02nd 2004
7
RE: March COTM: In Your Own Words.....
Mar 03rd 2004
13
RE: March COTM: In Your Own Words.....
Mar 25th 2004
43
RE: March COTM: In Your Own Words.....
Mar 02nd 2004
8
the..
Mar 24th 2004
38
ay soulchild this one was nice. n/m
Mar 02nd 2004
11
ah man...
Mar 03rd 2004
14
how long
Mar 03rd 2004
15
took a little bit
Mar 03rd 2004
16
Next "Artist Of The Month"?!?
Mar 03rd 2004
17
RE: Are you listening, My Son? (in your own words...)
Mar 06th 2004
21
that was hot
Mar 10th 2004
24
amazing....
Mar 24th 2004
39
True Stories
Mar 03rd 2004
18
this sounds ill on the
Mar 03rd 2004
19
I'M DIGGIN THIS!!!
Mar 05th 2004
20
desire seeks its own release
Mar 08th 2004
22
RE: desire seeks its own release
Mar 08th 2004
23
RE: desire seeks its own release
Mar 10th 2004
25
short yet...
Mar 24th 2004
37
RE: desire seeks its own release
Mar 25th 2004
44
dredging the archives
Mar 12th 2004
26
RE: dredging the archives
Mar 15th 2004
27
RE: dredging the archives
Mar 15th 2004
28
RE: dredging the archives
Mar 25th 2004
41
We Dance Forever...
Mar 15th 2004
29
RE: We Dance Forever...
Mar 16th 2004
32
last words
Mar 16th 2004
30
RE: last words
Mar 16th 2004
31
      Back4More
Mar 17th 2004
33
A Complex situation
Mar 17th 2004
34
RE: A Complex situation
Mar 17th 2004
35
      CoSign
Mar 24th 2004
36
the perfect piece....
Mar 25th 2004
40
RE: the perfect piece....
Mar 25th 2004
42
from the mind of blak_yukon
Mar 31st 2004
45
dbg's on some ish too
Mar 31st 2004
46

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