Nice verses from both of you but not enough punches.. so much filler in there I thought you guys were my aliases or something LOL.. naw
Ric had a more complicated rhymescheme... he came very close to disqualifying himself with his Exposure of his Phallic Soldier ..
Dash I liked your Ebony & Indigo line I would have really like you to get imaginitive and rhyme something wild on that ... "I beat you Ebony and Indigo.. yaou gainst me's like Kenny G gainst Wendigo" ya feel me?
Personally I think the no biting(not seeing each others verse) stipulation of this contest really got in both of your ways.