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Message Date |
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 I'll be back with this... |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 1
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| here is mine |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 2
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 Damn. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 39
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  what? lol |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 43
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| That shit was more depressing than G's. Wow. lol. tight tho. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 51
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| peopel keep saying that |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 54
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| Me like, me like... |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 71
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| word. I might try one right quick. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 3
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| easier said then done |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 4
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| i'd murder this if i wasn't working. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 5
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| I tried |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 6
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| Y u gotta be all depressin n shit? I mean, damn. 12.49? |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 23
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| sad stories stick |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 35
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| ... sliver of street cred |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 36
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| This ain't my best, but I'm at work. What can I tell you. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 7
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| Damn! |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 21
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| lol You're a sicko |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 67
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| LIFE is vulgar and grimy. I'm just keeping pace. But thank you. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 74
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| Very visual. Very die hardish. Very good. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 78
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| Dude. I wrote it in eleven minutes. Give me a LITTLE credit... |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 80
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| It was a compliment all the way dude |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 81
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| fair enuff. now i don't have to shoot this kitten. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 83
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| But how will you write your next story if not from experience? |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 84
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| I leave the kitten killing stories to my co-dee, Adwhizz. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 85
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| now comment on my ish below please |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 87
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| that was dope. strength of Solomon though? |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 93
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| Yeah, maybe a little heavy handed, I'll concede. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 95
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| Solomon though? or Samson? |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 96
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| ... i failed Hebrew School. Dang it! DANG IT!!!! |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 100
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| ---PART TWO--- |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 104
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| a tale of two new lovers: |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 8
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| lol lord |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 10
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| its *my* fantasy! in *my* fantasy he has an accent.... |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 11
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| *ahem* |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 9
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| lol. Tight. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 18
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| I like it, but it leaves me wanting some more |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 41
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| Ok...kinda crappy, but I'm at work haha |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 12
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| *sigh* |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 115
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| *leo on* Dag, was it that bad? *leo off* |
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Oct 19th 2005 | 167
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| nah...to be honest, I think I missed this one. |
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Oct 19th 2005 | 168
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| up. this was fun. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 13
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| ^ |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 14
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| The Punchline to the World's Greatest Joke |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 15
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| Feel a bit cheesy for asking, but I'd like a critique or two |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 90
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| RE: The Punchline to the World's Greatest Joke |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 142
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| Lemonade |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 16
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| I like, a bit hard to follow i think |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 22
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| Damn, how so? |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 117
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| nice |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 32
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| I just now paid attention to the title |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 68
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| we critiquing these things? |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 17
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| do what u like |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 19
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| We should |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 20
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| 5 fucking writers. ya'll so damn shy. n/m |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 24
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| huh? |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 29
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| I'm sayin. it's more writers than what was participating. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 38
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| Go to my plot post for inspiration |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 25
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| Somebody give me a word to start |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 26
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| empathy |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 27
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| used it |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 34
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| sodomy |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 28
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| used it |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 33
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| riddle |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 46
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| too late |
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Oct 05th 2005 |
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| too late |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 65
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| Love stories |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 30
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| I DIDN'T WRITE THIS SHIT FOR NOBODY TO COMMENT ON |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 61
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| lol |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 62
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| 1. You are believable as a homewrecker lol |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 63
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| Thank you for honoring me with kind words and critique |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 64
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| This cat. n/m |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 66
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| Cat? |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 69
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| Needs editing. Here's why. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 88
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| I would expect nothing less |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 89
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| Eeeevil |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 105
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| An old story I wrote 2 years ago |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 31
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| Neat, though you lose points for posting an old story |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 52
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| Neat, though you lose points for posting an old story |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 53
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| I took from the story two things. |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 131
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| okay, I just wrote this |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 37
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| I like the characters |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 109
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| Thank you |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 127
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| ... |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 40
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| I love it. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 42
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| thanks |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 47
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| me too. I haven't done any writing like this prolly since the |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 48
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| I like it, iuicide with character development wrapped up in a package |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 55
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| a literary burrito..... |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 133
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| lol I'm procrastinating my work, so I'll free-write |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 44
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| Feels like shit after reading yours compared to mine |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 49
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| I was waiting for this. Good shit. nm |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 50
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| oh that sucks man, good stuff |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 56
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| I might tackle this... I need some motivation |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 45
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| RE: |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 57
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| Hmm... |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 58
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| how boho of u |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 59
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| *lights nag champa* *sits indian style* *hums deeply* |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 60
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| Here. Forgive any types or mispellings |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 70
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| Tight. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 73
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| not bad. tenses are inconsistent. distracting. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 75
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| Yeah, I know |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 77
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| Dark.Moody.Cool.As.Hell. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 76
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| this here is some creepy shit |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 103
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| I wrote this in like seven minutes. I must be really bored at work |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 72
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| I was kind of hoping the figure would be |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 92
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| I thought that would be to obvious |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 108
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| waiting for that 5 0'clock to roll around |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 79
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| i'll be back later tonight. at work. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 82
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| Freshman |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 86
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| nice imagery. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 110
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| Thanks, mayne.... |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 120
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| so that's what all my posts are? well, flash non-fiction. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 91
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| here's mine |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 94
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| Here's my contribution... |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 97
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| most polished read in this thread, imo. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 101
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| Thanks, mang |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 102
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| That shit was dope. |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 116
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| it pains me to say: i dont get it. |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 119
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| well, I sorta left it open to interpretation |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 128
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| Cool. Nice imagery of her thoughts. |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 122
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| I'm not tryna pigeonhole you when I say this |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 132
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| Please, pigeonhole away |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 138
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| wow, anyone else notice how dark these stories are? |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 98
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| i'll be back here in a lil bit. |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 99
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| & now for something completely different |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 106
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| hmmm... very Pulp Fiction-ish |
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Oct 05th 2005 | 107
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| Thirst-1st person-present tense |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 111
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| Spartacuz. |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 112
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| SLAPBOXING WITH JESUS, VICTOR D. LAVALLE. |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 121
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| i'll take that as a compliment. i dig vic lavalle. |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 123
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| meant as a compliment. he opened a story @ the bronx like that. |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 124
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| i remember that story. I'M A BITER YO! |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 125
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| that's the one. i won't rat. you're clear. |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 126
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| niceness |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 130
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| thanks folk. |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 139
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| Tiny |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 113
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| & now for something completely different, pt II |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 114
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| You ain't no astronaut. |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 118
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| interesting. |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 134
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| i'd like to have his problems. |
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Oct 07th 2005 | 144
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| ima have to print this post out |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 129
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| OK |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 135
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| heres mine |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 136
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| RE: okaywriters, everyone: Flash Fiction exercise=one-page story |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 137
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| RE: okaywriters, everyone: Flash Fiction exercise=one-page story |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 140
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| i like it |
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Oct 06th 2005 | 141
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| damn. |
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Oct 07th 2005 | 143
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| i'll give it a go |
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Oct 07th 2005 | 145
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| bueller? bueller? |
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Oct 07th 2005 | 146
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| suggestions? comments? |
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Oct 07th 2005 | 147
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| read me!!! |
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Oct 07th 2005 | 148
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| wow. |
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Oct 07th 2005 | 149
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| that's it? |
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Oct 07th 2005 | 150
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| i'm not no lit critic |
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Oct 07th 2005 | 151
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| Hello, Beans. |
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Oct 07th 2005 | 152
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| she's a schitzophrenic |
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Oct 08th 2005 | 153
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| like a slow bullet. |
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Oct 08th 2005 | 155
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| up for more. |
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Oct 08th 2005 | 156
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| okay. i've got something. it's kinda long, maybe? |
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Oct 09th 2005 | 157
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| cold blooded! |
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Oct 10th 2005 | 158
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| I likes |
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Oct 11th 2005 | 160
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| yo we should put togtehr a chap book of al these stories |
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Oct 11th 2005 | 159
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| I'll help. What do you want to do? Just edit, or... |
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Oct 11th 2005 | 161
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| should this be archived till i cna fgure out what to do what al these st... |
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Oct 13th 2005 | 162
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| not yet. |
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Oct 13th 2005 | 163
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| then when? n/m |
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Oct 13th 2005 | 164
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| i'm soooo going to contribute to this .. i shall return my loves! |
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Oct 13th 2005 | 165
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| this should be archived i guess |
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Oct 19th 2005 | 166
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| who do i tell to archive this? |
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Oct 26th 2005 | 169
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