These ideas
Fall from the sky
Sporadic, spontaneous
and spaced out
Like the rain drops
Everyone's thirsty
Years of failing and working
Necks on a ninety degree bend
Tongues out trying to make ends
Meet
Drops hitting everywhere else
And you're already in knee deep
These ideas
When you get one
Grab it
Tackle it
Master it
Even under belief
It is below average
Far out from classic
Less than lavish
As long as you taste the passion
In the smallest drop
Drink
After Development
It will be running out of someone else's sink

I enjoyed reading this piece and how each line builds and blends on your vision with the most affective line for me ending with...

"After Development
It will be running out of someone else's sink"


Desta

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

very nicely done.

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