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lola1980
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Sun Jul-06-14 11:35 AM

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""Dreams Come True...Believe""


          

A bouquet of flowers rest at my feet
Eyes wide open I find a deep peace
A thousand soft kisses surround my pure heart
My true love is found we shall never depart

Fantastical imaginings should never be feared
A dream called Life remains highly revered
Existing without love would never end well
"They lived happily ever after" is the best ending to tell

A rain cloud of colors lightly cleanses sad faces
Perfect tears fall from God's loving graces
A prayer made in silence restores a lost past
Free to live laugh and love is our fate at last


Desta

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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RE: "Dreams Come True...Believe"
Jul 17th 2014
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RE: "Dreams Come True...Believe"
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Otto
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Thu Jul-17-14 01:02 PM

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1. "RE: "Dreams Come True...Believe""
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A rain cloud of colors lightly cleanses sad faces
Perfect tears fall from God's loving graces
A prayer made in silence restores a lost past
Free to live laugh and love is our fate at last

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I was moved by this, especially this line: "a prayer made in silence restores a lost past." I would say however, that a prayer made in silence restores the lost PRESENT. It is usually my experience that if we truly allow the past to be lost, then our NOW is much more enjoyable. This is perfect the way it is...I am just sharing my thoughts. Thanks for giving me something to think about.

-Otto

  

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KnowOne
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Fri Jul-18-14 09:35 AM

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>Fantastical imaginings should never be feared

this line speaks volumes. Nice drop...

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