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ASIEM
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Thu Nov-14-13 06:50 PM

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"7,6,5,4,3,2,1"


  

          

comin in from the cold in my heart
i knew from the start
in you i would never part
lets make this moment a lifetime
shades of gray no more
this is the love longed for
two lives trippin less

keepin trace with
black and white
she's tight an asteroid
shot cross the sky
fire light bright no mist priceless
forever we'll be entwined

like mine own imagination
three times two plus four we're one
greater is this in Us than
we will ever be alone
like Jenelle tells Miguel

"heaven is bettin on us"
no time to play
it's fun in workin it all thru
words write scribes all night

pennin majic lines
let the music play
a Legend in "All of Me"

i wish i could rap
instead let this wrap

arms around you

comfort and keep you
cause it's our time

still is the night
we learn everyday is what
we make it

let's make LOVE
Right now
cause thats all we got
what would this be

no tellin where
the numbers would fall
if chances on me
you did not take
not a gamble

it's been a journey
worth fightin for
the hours drifted into minutes
turnin days into nights
while the seasons went by
this year has been worth it

emotions run deep
the paradise found at the last breath
yet the first one taken cries
we made a promise
God never lies
Love kept us warm
Even when we didn't understand

if this were a song I would
place the refrain in each line
to be reminded of just
how much you mean
to me right
now forever
we


"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: 7,6,5,4,3,2,1
Nov 14th 2013
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RE: 7,6,5,4,3,2,1
Nov 18th 2013
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RE: 7,6,5,4,3,2,1
Apr 16th 2014
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RE: 7,6,5,4,3,2,1
May 17th 2014
4
could c this being a song
Jul 14th 2014
5
RE: 7,6,5,4,3,2,1
Jul 17th 2014
6

wetsalt
Member since Sep 21st 2012
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Thu Nov-14-13 10:38 PM

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1. "RE: 7,6,5,4,3,2,1"
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Sweet lines

  

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lola1980
Member since Aug 26th 2012
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Mon Nov-18-13 09:03 PM

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2. "RE: 7,6,5,4,3,2,1"
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I recently read an article titled "Love is in the Air; Don't Settle." In my opinion the author's thoughts strongly reflect the sentiment you have written so beautifully. Write-on ASIEM and forever sweet love.

"Sometimes it takes losing your mind in order to find your soul; but, there is a major upside to all of this. We attract exactly who we are to ourselves. With that equation how can we lose? When you come together with another self-actualized person, the energy fueling that type of relationship is indescribable. It’s pure magic and much different than anything you may have experienced prior to your metamorphosis."

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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ASIEM
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Wed Apr-16-14 09:31 PM

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3. "RE: 7,6,5,4,3,2,1"
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a day in April powered by the Sun
radiating the beauty of longing to see you again
we set out to journey for what the day would bring
laughter smiles and good eating
the rain would fall but not today
so sing in the voice of angels calling our names
this is the sound of laughter calling out
solito bonita dumela odun
just reach inside and find the feelin your own...

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

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Intrepid Vixen
Member since Nov 07th 2004
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Sat May-17-14 08:26 AM

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4. "RE: 7,6,5,4,3,2,1"
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Yes, sir you're still making the words bleed love. That was lovely.
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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Ezzsential
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Mon Jul-14-14 10:45 PM

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5. "could c this being a song"
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i dont have colors
my mmsic:
www.soundclick.com/sylana
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Brb8g8f18xE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NgNuVHrEKI

  

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Otto
Member since Dec 19th 2002
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Thu Jul-17-14 12:45 PM

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6. "RE: 7,6,5,4,3,2,1"
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Hello Dear Friend,

This spoke to me the most:

"God never lies
Love kept us warm
Even when we didn't understand"

-Otto


  

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