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lola1980
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Fri Dec-28-12 07:06 AM

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""Heaven Sent""


          

A warm glow filtered through a wick
Cast dancing shadows on sacred walls
Love breathed life into our vows as husband and wife
Blessed in oneness
We planted seeds in the magic of the night
Intertwined like the sweetness of honeysuckle
We settled in the full moon light
Greeted by the dawn of a new day
The spirit of our love bloomed

Desta

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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RE: "Heaven Sent"
Dec 29th 2012
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RE: "Heaven Sent"
Dec 30th 2012
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RE: "Heaven Sent"
Dec 30th 2012
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RE: "Heaven Sent"
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HueyNewton
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Sat Dec-29-12 02:19 PM

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1. "RE: "Heaven Sent""
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now I wanna read the rest of the story, it flowed nice!!

across 110th street
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they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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lola1980
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Sun Dec-30-12 05:48 PM

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2. "RE: "Heaven Sent""
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Greatly appreciate your feedback!

Desta

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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ASIEM
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Sun Dec-30-12 10:23 PM

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3. "RE: "Heaven Sent""
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Sun Dec-30-12 10:23 PM by ASIEM

  

          

your words for some reason all seem part of a whole yet to be puzzled,
snippets of a bigger picture and story.
good writing does that I guess leaving the reader wanting?

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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lola1980
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As you simply stated in a recent writing "who knows the end in the beginning?" The story or journey of life and loving in my opinion is made of a many snapshots or "snippets" that make up the whole. For me some of my fondest yet painful beginnings and endings have been short lived for me.

Desta

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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