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Sat Sep-08-12 10:17 PM

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"Suicide Intervention"


          

I was listening to Rass Kass
"Nature of the threat" at my job
when i felt a hodge podge of odd
sensations inside my
soul it was like hope died
in a dream i woke out of
i stood up abruptly and walked out
in search of the truth_

Leaving behind a bright future
inside of a tight cubicle
to pursue a new rubix cube
in the shadows
some called it foolish
i called it suicide intervention
by self invention
and venting the blues_

existence is too_
brief for pretending

i'd rather fail at being me
than succeed as a carbon copy
of somebody elses property

or thoughtful engineering

  

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RE: Suicide Intervention
Sep 09th 2012
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RE: Suicide Intervention
Sep 09th 2012
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RE: Suicide Intervention
Sep 15th 2012
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RE: Suicide Intervention
Sep 17th 2012
5
*head nod*
Sep 17th 2012
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RE: Suicide Intervention
Sep 20th 2012
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RE: Suicide Intervention
Sep 22nd 2012
7

Nowachaoticthing
Member since Dec 24th 2002
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Sun Sep-09-12 12:10 AM

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1. "RE: Suicide Intervention"
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This. Yes, this.

I relate to this so much, it's scary. If this is born from actual events, I wish you luck. If this is simply a work of art born from empathy, then I salute you.

"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

http://inevitabletruth.blogspot.com/
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http://www.hdfest.com/Barry/allreviewsbarry.html
http://wishbonec.wordpress.com/

  

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ASIEM
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Sun Sep-09-12 04:54 PM

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2. "RE: Suicide Intervention"
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Sun Sep-09-12 04:55 PM by ASIEM

  

          

surely this shall be continued it has much depth and yet is waiting for parts to connect themselves intertwine the lines between the themes that keep coming in the night in the light in the wake from all past fright yes this has so much more please write it!

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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ak_reborn
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Sat Sep-15-12 11:08 PM

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3. "RE: Suicide Intervention"
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A page from my book of life.

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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ASIEM
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Mon Sep-17-12 04:54 PM

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i received a call today letting me know a young man maybe 28 who I was close to at one point even mentoring this year has put a bullet in his head 2 days ago and has passed today...the themes the poems the writing never seems prepare us for life when something like this happens

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

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KnowOne
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Mon Sep-17-12 10:54 AM

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nm

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"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

IG: KnowOne215 | PS+ ID: KnowOne215

  

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alyriki
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Thu Sep-20-12 04:30 AM

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thank you for posting... i needed this tonight

a lyrical kind
- Alyriki -

  

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wetsalt
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Sat Sep-22-12 11:01 PM

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To me this is a true spoken word poem

  

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