I was listening to Rass Kass "Nature of the threat" at my job when i felt a hodge podge of odd sensations inside my soul it was like hope died in a dream i woke out of i stood up abruptly and walked out in search of the truth_
Leaving behind a bright future inside of a tight cubicle to pursue a new rubix cube in the shadows some called it foolish i called it suicide intervention by self invention and venting the blues_
existence is too_ brief for pretending
i'd rather fail at being me than succeed as a carbon copy of somebody elses property
1. "RE: Suicide Intervention" In response to Reply # 0
This. Yes, this.
I relate to this so much, it's scary. If this is born from actual events, I wish you luck. If this is simply a work of art born from empathy, then I salute you.
"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession." - Robert Frost
2. "RE: Suicide Intervention" In response to Reply # 0 Sun Sep-09-12 04:55 PM by ASIEM
surely this shall be continued it has much depth and yet is waiting for parts to connect themselves intertwine the lines between the themes that keep coming in the night in the light in the wake from all past fright yes this has so much more please write it!
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
5. "RE: Suicide Intervention" In response to Reply # 2
i received a call today letting me know a young man maybe 28 who I was close to at one point even mentoring this year has put a bullet in his head 2 days ago and has passed today...the themes the poems the writing never seems prepare us for life when something like this happens
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder