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Street Poet
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"Old Man Lawson's Thoughts on Love"


          

"Everybody acts like love is supposed to be easy. When it's not. It's the direct opposite. Love is a voluntary ass whoopin'. Love is an ass whoopin'. I should write a poem about that shit. A love supreme.

When it rains, let the water wash away the fakeness to reveal the real. Love is a bad bitch in a nice dress and heels who forgot to take her meds.

Loving hard is useless if the person you're loving has a soft spot for someone else. I tried to tell people the key to everything is hard work… and love ain't no different. Stop believing what you see on the tv and believe what you feel in your heart. Stop chasing something that was manufactured in a studio and embrace what was created by the power of God. A love supreme.

I look around and humanity is dying man. Hatred is the new cool, and loneliness is the new faithful. Social media is slowly eroding our ability to build meaningful relationships. People don't write love letters anymore...they send text messages instead. What a fucking drag. The planet is heating up and love is getting colder. Only in my dreams is a love supreme. May God help us all."


* Old Man Lawson is a character in a story I'm writing titled Distorted love. His favorite album is A Love Supreme which is why he repeats the title of the album.

  

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RE: Old Man Lawson's Thoughts on Love
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HueyNewton
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Sat Aug-04-12 01:08 PM

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1. "RE: Old Man Lawson's Thoughts on Love"
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great concept cuz it ain't nothin' but the truth, real thoughts!

across 110th street
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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ASIEM
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great writing love this line

" Love is a bad bitch in a nice dress and heels who forgot to take her meds."

I am laughing so hard it's true what a mess...lmao
the plot is perfect develop envelope and make it happen 'send it'

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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ak_reborn
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Sat Aug-25-12 05:24 AM

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the whole thing was deep, the love letter to txt messages, the worlds getting warmer, everything and its true. People never see how the world changes right before your eyes and so easily adapt for survival has always been priority, but to what extent?

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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goodboy
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Every one want to do love but I think love is not so easy as the people ask. Love is great if you want to love with someone with heartedly.
http://www.worldtransformation.com/what-is-love/

  

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goodboy
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We use the word ‘love’ to refer to a variety of emotions ranging from enjoyment (‘I love that sunset’) to interpersonal relationships (‘I love you’), but the question remains: what actually is love?
You can read more about love is at http://www.worldtransformation.com/what-is-love/

  

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Street Poet
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Thank you for your responses.

  

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wetsalt
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Love the lines

  

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ASIEM
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while love yes tantalizes tittilates
even mesmerizes
it is often misunderstood
it finds itself the victim
in a war torn world
everybody trying to take ownership
as if it can be bought sold or bartered
Love everybody needs it
but few find it worth keeping
raising a tax on being in love
makes loving a political talk peace
rant and rave about who has
the right to write the wrong
when all else is lost
speak your truth
tell your story
say it out loud
i love because i am Love
therefore Love is where I am
As I Em
an emotion yes sometimes
a lifestyle always
and never to return
to an alibi looking for an excuse to exist
ashamed to be seen in public no more
no my Love will last
it will no longer be traded
for the feeling i had the last time
i measured it by what you gave me in secret
No this time Love is Me
Love is Me
Love is you in me

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

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lola1980
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Love Replaces Fear And We Just Need to Believe Not Become Numb

Lenny Kravitz Believe Lyrics
I am you and you are me
Why's that such a mystery ?
If you want it you got to believe
Who are we ?
We're who we are
Riding on this great big star
We've got to stand up if we're gonna be free yeah

If you want it you got to believe
Believe in yourself
'Cause it's all just a game
We just want to be loved

The Son of God is in your face
Offering us eternal grace
If you want it you've got to believe
'Cause being free is just a state of mind
We'll one day leave this all behind
Just put your faith in God
And one day you'll see it
If you want it you got it
You just got to believe
Believe in yourself
'Cause it's all just a game
We just want to be loved

The future's in our present hands
Let's reach right in
Let's understand
If you want it you've got to believe yeah

If you want it you got it
You just got to believe
Believe in yourself yeah
'Cause it's all just a game
We just want to be loved

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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