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UncleClimax
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Sun Dec-25-11 12:43 AM

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"Your mouth"


  

          

Your mouth is that magical rose
Whose petals bewitch me
Fall away just as I would touch them
As if dissolving: snowflakes who melt
before they would cascade into one's hands

Your softness grows ever coarser
Your smile: a chaos
No longer a gesture of endearment but a foretaste of danger
Your delightful hands pass over my skin.
coldly, and make only mischief

How I would to cut off the long hand of my poetry
How I yearn to throw off the yoke of my devotion
to the cult of your smilehair
...

Emboldened by your giddy refusal, I cut adrift
thoughts of your naked feet climbing up my back and slump
into my corner ashamed for shit is fucked upbullshitis.
My desire, my need to possess and therefore oppress
is the lone agent of my undoing.
You cannot be held at fault, for we all know you are too
much.

If you never understand a thing I say, know this at least,
if only this,
Thee is a barnyard locked away behind the snow,
and there you can come and I will always hold you
as tight as the sun holds the midday sky and
We will dancily sway in incandescent light until you
innocently fall asleep in my aching arms.

'"Please let us live together in a state of grace."'

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RE: Your mouth
Dec 28th 2011
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RE: Your mouth
Dec 30th 2011
2
in my aching arms
Jan 02nd 2012
3
RE: Your mouth
Jan 03rd 2012
4

PhotoSynthesis
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Wed Dec-28-11 11:16 PM

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1. "RE: Your mouth"
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*How Romantic* ... utterly!

Your words have an "OLD WORLD" texture to them ... laced with a CONTEMPORARY mentality! Kinda like Shakespeare mixxxed with a lil' Saul Williams. ---- *nice*

Good to see you're still posting ...

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I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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sunlight
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Fri Dec-30-11 12:19 AM

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2. "RE: Your mouth"
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Some poems here are
to good, to be wasted?

No not 'wasted' but
should be PUBLISHED!.

...Just my way of giving a compliment....
that's all

  

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mindful
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3. "in my aching arms"
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Clever display of alliteration and language. Also, grand way to end the poem too...

favorite lines:

How I would to cut off the long hand of my poetry
How I yearn to throw off the yoke of my devotion
to the cult of your smilehair
...

Emboldened by your giddy refusal, I cut adrift
thoughts of your naked feet climbing up my back and slump
into my corner ashamed for shit is fucked upbullshitis.
My desire, my need to possess and therefore oppress
is the lone agent of my undoing.
You cannot be held at fault, for we all know you are too
much.

If you never understand a thing I say, know this at least,
if only this,
Thee is a barnyard locked away behind the snow,
and there you can come and I will always hold you
as tight as the sun holds the midday sky

You are one of the reasons why I still come back to this board... Peace~

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ASIEM
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Tue Jan-03-12 05:06 PM

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4. "RE: Your mouth"
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Tue Jan-03-12 05:07 PM by ASIEM

  

          

props for an altruistic expression of devotion cause for real it seem as tho this was not a mutual thing but one hoped for? and even love has to find new meaning here hmmm...

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
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(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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