posted symmetry talented telemetry listening to thought beams from distant memories higher calling in low doses taking measure not just for pleasure what does it all mean?
wrestled wit demons last night woke up singing an Angel sent a message i touched myself falling grace infinity past the state of dreaming where is this going?
slow rhythm color schemes floating on screen red blue green someones listening quiet calm came over me spirit lifted these three things a principle honesty an experience loving and purpose time
living for the moment keeping pace it fly's this time all it brings is laughter to the face spoken music falling down just like manna to the ground once this feeling reaches no sense crying now everything has changed already take another look then i'll see you smiling we'll c u then we'll all be sm ng
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
3. "I think you could have ended it" In response to Reply # 0
slow rhythm color schemes floating on screen red blue green someones listening quiet calm came over me spirit lifted these three things a principle honesty an experience loving and purpose time
living for the moment keeping pace it fly's this time all it brings is laughter to the face spoken music falling down just like manna to the ground once this feeling reaches no sense crying now everything has changed already take another look then i'll see you smiling
~directly above and the poem would have been succinct. The last two lines seem forced, as if they don't belong. I liked this; simple, positive, and colorful. Peace~
4. "RE: I think you could have ended it" In response to Reply # 3
point well taken the first two i believe were the clearing ground for the poem to be written...thanks "succinct" i likes
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
There's a whimsical ambiance to this flow -- *I Likes* -- but I have to agree with Ms. mindful that the last two lines were more like filler.
I'm still smiling tho!
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
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