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shilohnine
Member since Oct 11th 2007
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Tue Apr-26-11 10:04 AM

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"brother."


  

          

ocean eyes,
i get drowned, knocked down in your tides.
letting go is so
intoxicating, this suffocation-
a headrush of blood before the salt water throws down
& melts the breath in my lungs like a brine for love.

the night sky is right by to steal what i can't stomach.
rips the trees right thru my knees so out we'll fall,
and justice for all.

good mourning trash talker.
paint the whole world under seas so this anchor wouldn't be
floating in the clouds forming jagged ionic rainbows
with mercurial delight.
it's all about the violent fight, you're so lovely.
it's all about the view, don't you
forget the regret, even put it on my right arm.
wipe away the odd heartbeats with an onyx passion,
blacked out & bound on the ground
like a silver toothed sailor ghost watching lust drip to dust

but still,
the best thing that ever happened to me was
your eyelashes bleeding sparks into my mouth,
i couldn't close it.
awe awe awe.

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RE: doom
Apr 26th 2011
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RE: brother.
Apr 30th 2011
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RE: brother.
May 02nd 2011
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dragontales
Member since Aug 10th 2010
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Tue Apr-26-11 10:21 AM

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1. "RE: doom"
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zane indeed one of the hottest
step up-

  

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HueyNewton
Member since Feb 27th 2005
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Sat Apr-30-11 02:08 PM

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great wordplay and details humble, nice piece {}

a decade of struggle
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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WILDOUT
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Mon May-02-11 01:04 PM

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you should write a book
i would buy it, read it, and see it all in my minds eye

((wo))

  

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