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_NoireGolde_
Member since Jan 02nd 2011
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Tue Feb-08-11 07:07 AM

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"golden rabbit"


  

          

you run.an armie of invaders
watching over me like satellites
from outter space you scheme
wondering why the mask
and who is behind the disguise

cams in her face
like a dick in a porn

you wonder huh
this world is a big
fat pawn

a wide open hoar

you ask many concerns
remember the 80's
more freedom in the ghettos

now to approach
you must peel
the layer

it's ashame the f b eye
in on line plotting
alibi's
and using kin

this was simple stuff
nothing serious, but
the pommade of a cranberry
never about your c.r.e.a.m
to add
she has riches already
the word is'

poor wabbit
is a superhero
she focus's her
3rd eye
seeing the inside scoop
past the fleshy
material'she digs pastit

If people kept it real
they'd have no prob with that'

no reason to fake the funky

then as all others
it fades.

she fly's east
and loses
nothing,but
gains respect.

demonstrated'watch this

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: golden rabbit
Feb 08th 2011
1
RE: poets pen
Feb 08th 2011
2
shits dope
Feb 11th 2011
3

ASIEM
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Tue Feb-08-11 07:35 PM

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1. "RE: golden rabbit"
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learning to speak and read txt n net lingo is an ongoing ever changing language the art of interpretation is fast becoming one of the most valuable tools of our day...like f b is that facebook? would love to know i get it something about the wordplay has my attention

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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Babynoon
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Tue Feb-08-11 09:30 PM

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2. "RE: poets pen"
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Tue Feb-08-11 09:46 PM by Babynoon

          

Writing is an art of course we know

as painting's hide many
passages to what you're actually seeing'

many writers including yourself have that effectiveness '

my favs are the simpler one's'

small and full

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UncleClimax
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Fri Feb-11-11 02:38 AM

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3. "shits dope"
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cleverly structured
had energy...caught the eye and the ear both

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