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Vayaiah Sunduh
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Sat Jul-24-10 12:37 AM

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"Nuclear Loving"
Sat Jul-24-10 12:58 AM by Vayaiah Sunduh

          

Afterward
I found out
the worst
and it hit
hard
missile straight
through my heart
rates to high
an sick for insurance
they won't accept
my forms

My beloved heart
torn
nuclear missile
busted up
me my house
an the whole block
is how bad it went
down
look around
look around
death rekindles
life
pain from strife
hurt can heal
loss is the sacrifice
we all must make
to show after each fall
stronger and wiser
as we reincarnate

needed somewhere else
to bleed
except internally
the eye's that read
forgive me for the
sad love song
as we all need
a resting place
only to regenerate
from irate

this world has
already gone crazy
I dare to add to it's
mischief, but weep o weeb
My solid heart is now hollow
tip if this new dreamy
eros I Q N
is tracking me
Must let him know
I am not ready

Time to heal
what wasn't killed

I feel reincarnated
the Most High
is all to really
fear if his love left
anyone.


Written few years ago

Exodus

  

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RE: Nuclear Loving
Jul 24th 2010
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RE: Nuclear Loving
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the_best_part
Member since Jan 13th 2005
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Sat Jul-24-10 08:58 AM

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this is thick with emotion. it sorts of halts your breathing, but opens you up for air at the end. beautifully written.

@asiaradiant

  

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HueyNewton
Member since Feb 27th 2005
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Sat Jul-24-10 01:29 PM

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wow . . intense vocab with a descriptive concept, good one!

they usually burn sage
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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