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soulsugar
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Tue Jun-08-10 07:24 AM

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"SPIRIT. "
Tue Jun-08-10 07:38 AM by soulsugar

          

(God Forgive Me)
Of Love,

Keep your way in me
Never leave me empty
Never allowing hate to replace you
Never letting go

All those creatures of God
Whom my mouth cursed upon for the annoyances you've carelessly have shown to me
My words have scorned your thought to be angered spirit at that unknown moment
I felt your hurt from my over powered emotion and words spoke

That is not who I am to become here on this earth
I know better
I knew better

I can be better

  

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RE: SPIRIT.
Jun 13th 2010
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RE: SPIRIT.
Jun 16th 2010
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RE: SPIRIT.
Jun 16th 2010
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Otto
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Sun Jun-13-10 09:35 PM

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1. "RE: SPIRIT. "
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Never allowing hate to replace you

Soulsugar...this was a tasty treat. I absoultely loved this piece. Today my lesson from A Course in Miracles was:

"I am Spirit.
I will accept God's plan for my salvation."


It's very much related to your piece. Thanks for posting.

-Otto

  

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soulsugar
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Wed Jun-16-10 09:45 AM

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I failed to realise on many occasions past that WE are truly NOT our HAIR'persay, as though many still think we are not bodied up the same. Red blood, Heart, Intestines (Organs) and so .....("on & on'-Erykah Badu)

SPIRITS, devine light of energy from God...time to treat US much better from here on.

Appreciate you reading this

  

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Dragon Fly
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Wed Jun-16-10 05:38 PM

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I liked this. First off, well written, which is always a treat. More importantly, though, it was chock full of DETERMINATION. Not necessarily hope or positive thought or any of that, but just, at least to my mental ears, cold, angry determination. Which is a facet of life that is so necessary to a full and happy life, yet so many poets, MCs, and prophets fail to discuss.

Thank you for sharing.

  

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