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wonluv
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Thu Apr-29-10 08:34 AM

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"life"
Thu Apr-29-10 08:34 AM by wonluv

  

          

looking searching praying for some inspiration
and then star shined to light up my presentation
the catalyst of this cat equal 4 letters
i wasn't looking for it; but rather something better
but what could top my experience, imagination
my gift is making room like wombs for a generation
a little time, a lotta pain, and a heafty push
then something beautiful's born, and now my heart is hooked
i'm just rhyming man, trying to perfect the skill
take it to englewood, and use it to nation build
insert a 'plan', remove the 'kill'
birth peace like mama ghandi so the mommies never bury bodies

~sicknature~ My financial skills/discipline need Jesus. -J-Skivvy

****We need more Pharoahe Monch!!!****

  

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below is what struck me the most
May 09th 2010
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RE: life
May 16th 2010
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A Righteous Gift, Indeed!
May 19th 2010
3
RE: life
May 19th 2010
4

mindful
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Sun May-09-10 09:35 AM

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1. "below is what struck me the most"
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i'm just rhyming man, trying to perfect the skill
take it to englewood, and use it to nation build
insert a 'plan', remove the 'kill'
birth peace like mama ghandi so the mommies never bury bodies

*nods*

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Otto
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Sun May-16-10 11:41 PM

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2. "RE: life"
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insert a 'plan', remove the 'kill'
birth peace like mama ghandi so the mommies never bury bodies

^^^This particular piece of your piece was peace....cool

Peace,

-Otto

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Wed May-19-10 01:39 PM

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3. "A Righteous Gift, Indeed!"
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>i wasn't looking for it; but rather something better
>but what could top my experience, imagination
>my gift is making room like wombs for a generation
>a little time, a lotta pain, and a heafty push
>then something beautiful's born, and now my heart is hooked
>i'm just rhyming man, trying to perfect the skill


*Keep Perfecting That *Gift* --





A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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empro
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Wed May-19-10 01:50 PM

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4. "RE: life"
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>looking searching praying for some inspiration
>and then star shined to light up my presentation
>the catalyst of this cat equal 4 letters
>i wasn't looking for it; but rather something better
>but what could top my experience, imagination
>my gift is making room like wombs for a generation
>a little time, a lotta pain, and a heafty push
>then something beautiful's born, and now my heart is hooked
>i'm just rhyming man, trying to perfect the skill
>take it to englewood, and use it to nation build
>insert a 'plan', remove the 'kill'
>birth peace like mama ghandi so the mommies never bury bodies


Beautifully written fam.

  

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