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Fri Dec-18-09 11:23 AM

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"Brown Moon"


  

          

trust me, i'm not looking for aliens. i've been in love with the sky lately starting back in october. it is where i got my name from. this was about how sometimes the moon looks gigantic and yellowish with a tint of orange. i did a second one a couple a weeks ago, which i will post next. weather man called it a winter halo. yea, whatever, but it was beautiful to see nonetheless. if you want to see, it's on my facebook account for all to see. ENJOY!!!




she hangs low
above the trees
just out of reach

she courts the darkness
with her sphere,
only illuminating the status
where my heart will not appear

she sways
gently into the night
of a glorious day,
making the world see my bloody
version of sexy,
all exposed,
clear for all to see

she’s a circle
I can’t follow
round and round,
very slow

she lingers in the sky,
scary in some features,
but beautiful
altogether

I can see her rainbows
dancing from the street lamps
and windows
above the roads

and just when I was going to
change my mind,
she caught my equinox
at the right time
and then returned
to her normal state
by leaving me
before I awake

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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RE: Brown Moon
Dec 20th 2009
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RE: Brown Moon
Dec 23rd 2009
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RE: Brown Moon
Dec 26th 2009
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ASIEM
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Sun Dec-20-09 12:10 PM

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superb writing actually captured me from the pretext "Brown Moon" yaeh i been sayin the colors of the moon are so many we often miss them

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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PhotoSynthesis
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Wed Dec-23-09 01:21 AM

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I appreciate the preface to this ... prior to my reading it.

It comes 2~gether nicely with an understanding of where you're comin' from and whatcha talkin' 'bout ... *YeP~YeP*

*Beautiful Indeed* ... just like the night skies and full moon!


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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Isabella Moon
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Sat Dec-26-09 01:34 AM

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Well...Needless to say, the title drew me in...but the entire piece captured the beauty and romanticism of the moon in a lovely way.

"How can you stand right in front of the truth and not see it?"

"OK...Who put a stop payment on my reality check?"

"Your age is one of my favorite things about you"~ Steve Martin

http://soulwhispersnheartmeditations.blogspot.com/

  

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