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Cold Truth
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Tue Nov-17-09 11:32 PM

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"yo, i need no crew"


  

          

need no hype man
my mere presence excites more then hype can
my right hand man?
it's that mic in my right hand
in times of distress,
like a bible on the night stand
black steel grip, no clips to unload
gotta hollow tip tongue,
spit to slaughter my foes
they keep me on the run,
i reach far on my toes
if they reachin' for their gun
i'm quick with the hard blow
the talk about cold?
he's rugged and hard-nosed
street scholar, blue collar spark to his flow
the moniker so brolic,
like a boxer of old
and everybody colic cause i'm rockin it bold
i got so much moxy, juggernaut couldn't stop me
apollo creed swagger, even rockie wouldn't matter
immaculate toe-tagger, just naturally throw daggers
i'll splatter the brain matter of any of these fake rappers
they eatin good and gettin fatter,
but i'm mixin up cake batter...

-Sig-

“Why didn’t you do this in your own god damn country?"

-All Stah's view on undocumented immigrants wanting to be treated like human beings.

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: yo, i need no crew
Nov 17th 2009
1
You exist already
Nov 17th 2009
2
thing is, i'm not going at anybody
Nov 18th 2009
4
ha. nice response.
Nov 17th 2009
3
      RE: ha. nice response.
Nov 18th 2009
5

WILDOUT
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Tue Nov-17-09 11:52 PM

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1. "RE: yo, i need no crew"
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>need no hype man
>my mere presence excites more then hype can
>my right hand man?
>it's that mic in my right hand
>in times of distress,
>like a bible on the night stand
>black steel grip, no clips to unload
>gotta hollow tip tongue,
>spit to slaughter my foes
>they keep me on the run,
>i reach far on my toes
>if they reachin' for their gun
>i'm quick with the hard blow
>the talk about cold?
>he's rugged and hard-nosed
>street scholar, blue collar spark to his flow
>the moniker so brolic,
>like a boxer of old
>and everybody colic cause i'm rockin it bold
>i got so much moxy, juggernaut couldn't stop me
>apollo creed swagger, even rockie wouldn't matter
>immaculate toe-tagger, just naturally throw daggers
>i'll splatter the brain matter of any of these fake rappers
>they eatin good and gettin fatter,
>but i'm mixin up cake batter...

This was ill but literally ill too
Why would you work so hard to rock murderous rhymes to do what?
Why limit yourself to the destruction of others
where you could be the transformation of your enemies
which situation has more gravity to you
being gravity or being pulled by gravity
1) seeing that you were randomly persecuted not as an individual
but en mass as a target
or 2) realizing that it wasn't you they aimed for
and then recognizing that you are born in the middle of this
belittling twist of fate's riddling worth into existences
and then maybe just maybe

all the rap beefs will cease at the pace of the flow
and what was rap will become a vortex into growth

  

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WILDOUT
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Tue Nov-17-09 11:55 PM

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2. "You exist already"
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And we do need ourselves more...

Because decisions must be made by individual's to get things done.

Resolve is necessary to create using will power

yet;

focus is lost when wasted on others
you say you need no crew but without others to rap about here your flow would be short on content

So in truth; you may not need a crew; but you still need peoples

  

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Cold Truth
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Wed Nov-18-09 12:04 AM

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4. "thing is, i'm not going at anybody"
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i'm not challenging anyone so much as making the statement that i'm a man on my own two feet.

i dunno, i'm just not thinking about it as being that deep. just a good old fashioned spit-to-spit, grab my dick kinda rhyme.

-Sig-

“Why didn’t you do this in your own god damn country?"

-All Stah's view on undocumented immigrants wanting to be treated like human beings.

  

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Cold Truth
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Tue Nov-17-09 11:59 PM

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3. "ha. nice response. "
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>This was ill but literally ill too
>Why would you work so hard to rock murderous rhymes to do
>what?
>Why limit yourself to the destruction of others
>where you could be the transformation of your enemies
>which situation has more gravity to you
>being gravity or being pulled by gravity

well it's not that serious to me, not this. just a straight ahead jumpoff rhyme. the beat is done and there is no hook, it's just gonna be two verses like this and a scratched interlude. just some good ol' mc shit.

2) realizing that it wasn't you they aimed for
>and then recognizing that you are born in the middle of this
>belittling twist of fate's riddling worth into existences
>and then maybe just maybe
>
>all the rap beefs will cease at the pace of the flow
>and what was rap will become a vortex into growth

true that, no argument here. i'm not really thinking that heavy with this, though i see what your gettin at. way to put it, by the way. i enjoy many styles of rap personally. i only view rap beef as a negative when it's taken off wax or stage and into personal violence. there is a place for the sport of it, but it's when that sport escalates into blood lust that it's no longer in good spirit.

-Sig-

“Why didn’t you do this in your own god damn country?"

-All Stah's view on undocumented immigrants wanting to be treated like human beings.

  

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WILDOUT
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Wed Nov-18-09 12:10 AM

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5. "RE: ha. nice response. "
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Yeah rhythmically I liked this piece;
It seems like it would be rocked a lot by people if played in stereo..

Which is why I felt I had to say something;
mainly because it irritates me that the heavier you get with the subjects the stranger it seems to make it a jump off track that flows like that

as for rap beef; competition is obsolete; creative ciphering is always good though; but when I battle people I usually draw there attention outside of themselves more than inside; And when I beef that's something much deeper; I tend not to do it anymore because rap beef to send something out that takes people apart is too too heavy to me for making movements

I can't willingly try to escalate goodness in people if I focus on the flaws of those who want me to stumble

And when I diss mans; Usually its personal; usually it has thought in it just like the next tunes

but whatever
I'm just an mc with over 100 songs recorded and no producer or contract

I dont know what that means to you, but to me it means I do this for me

and for me to need and want to do it requires meaning to manifest itself or I travel away from things............on r'angents (random tangents)

newayz
interesting flow i like that style
reminded me of some big l tip
but that was then and this is now

"I'm not the pigs, chicken, or beef; so you must a take me for mutton"-Eekamouse

  

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