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Zin
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Often I’m caught in awkward moments when authoring Poems .. That walk with the swag of the author … properly fathered … see I berf these

With the Mary virgin ..I purge words into sentences of life 35 years I write … indecent proposals lock in this prison … indicted by my vision … see what I see

Co~defended with tears my ears hear the screams of the women who lost their seeds to the streets …and aborted babies… who’s life’s essence was discretely ceased …in a comfortable room on Little Creek … this road is ruff

My brother who’s roughage was enuff and a friend’s who weekends never added up … to what she thought life was suppose to be …so she and he …on a night …something like this figured they’d …call god’s bluff

I was a different person at those times … boy then man … 88 and 06...there’s almost 20 years between …them but this shit still stings … when you sit back think about it …see …I have yet to find the rhyming word for this type of hurt … Fin

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RE: this.............................
Nov 16th 2009
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RE: this.............................
Nov 16th 2009
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I Miss This ...
Nov 16th 2009
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photo ...
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Nov 22nd 2009
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the_best_part
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new life is coming.

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ASIEM
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Mon Nov-16-09 06:41 PM

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a motel gangsta
bound and tied in a closet
body cold no one close
enuff to miss him
two sista's
naked left strangled in an alley
headline news at 10
40 cars ridin down colfax
highbeams at noon
97' 3 days to bmore on a bus
mile high city left behind
<<<<<<<<this>>>>>>> aint no game


yo i remembered thanku

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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PhotoSynthesis
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Mon Nov-16-09 07:49 PM

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Your words
Written
From The Heart
Poetic Sentiments
Redeemed as art
It's been awhile
From stop to start

*Don't Stop*

( ( (More Please ) ) )






A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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Zin
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Sun Nov-22-09 09:40 AM

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i never stop writing like this i just stop posting them ... thanks for reading

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remember the 'all in all'?

shit was amazing, no pun. okay, yes pun. but yeah...i know you penning daily, like i pen daily. i know life happens and things change but we always write.


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