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shilohnine
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Sat Nov-07-09 12:48 PM

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"baby face."


  

          

i know how it goes but the head light brights of your
red shot eyes scream fight or flight, slow down all night.
don't speak until the mourning sun annihilates the moon.
there is no fair warning but infinitely they'll love him,
like a Christian to Rome, the life will bleed from their old veins.

clad in the stars with a bachelor's heart
and a split lip leaking all of your secrets to the
young earth. sweet candles streaming
like tongues through the ancient;
there goes Latin with the romance prose,
our vessels sink. drew the sky terrible in cobalt ink.

i won't fall out.
named for a town that went down in flaming vistas,
cinnamon throats ablaze with passion.
like fog by the road we were sharing the load,
the dying embers forming blankets of hardened leaves crying
'survive another dawn, i won't fall out of love'.

silence.
it's what we bonded over,
bound in restless halves.

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RE: baby face.
Nov 07th 2009
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thanks
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RE: baby face.
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RE: baby face.
Nov 08th 2009
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thank you
Nov 08th 2009
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this was well-written
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WILDOUT
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Sat Nov-07-09 01:31 PM

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1. "RE: baby face."
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i love being the first to peep this...
good work again

  

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shilohnine
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Sat Nov-07-09 02:05 PM

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2. "thanks"
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:)

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Isabella Moon
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Sat Nov-07-09 05:14 PM

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3. "RE: baby face."
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I really get a lot out of the visuals you create from the colorful way your mind flows.

"How can you stand right in front of the truth and not see it?"

"OK...Who put a stop payment on my reality check?"

"Your age is one of my favorite things about you"~ Steve Martin

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PhotoSynthesis
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Sun Nov-08-09 09:56 AM

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>clad in the stars with a bachelor's heart
>and a split lip leaking all of your secrets to the
>young earth. sweet candles streaming
>like tongues through the ancient;
>there goes Latin with the romance prose,
>our vessels sink. drew the sky terrible in cobalt ink.


^This^ right here ... gave me a hella~nice buzz ... better than a shot a' tequila and a pinwheel ~joint~ --



*Smokey~Nice*




A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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shilohnine
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Sun Nov-08-09 02:03 PM

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i am very proud of this piece. im glad it's being received well.

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mindful
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Sun Nov-08-09 11:28 AM

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5. "this was well-written"
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especially here:

clad in the stars with a bachelor's heart
and a split lip leaking all of your secrets to the
young earth. sweet candles streaming
like tongues through the ancient;
there goes Latin with the romance prose,
our vessels sink. drew the sky terrible in cobalt ink.

i won't fall out.
named for a town that went down in flaming vistas,
cinnamon throats ablaze with passion.
like fog by the road we were sharing the load,
the dying embers forming blankets of hardened leaves crying
'survive another dawn, i won't fall out of love'.

*nods* Peace~

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