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mindful
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"moving: a haiku"


  

          

I think I'm going to get on my haiku kick again so I'll use this post to add new poems as they come to me.

moving

boxes are packed, yes!
3 weeks until change arrives,
and I'm so ready.

©Tremaine L. Loadholt 26October09


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RE: moving: a haiku
Oct 26th 2009
1
your haiku..
Oct 27th 2009
2
thank you kindly man, I'm over here overwhelmed w/ joy :) nm
Oct 28th 2009
4
      change is a wonderful thing and never ends! :)
Oct 30th 2009
8
autumn
Oct 28th 2009
3
Dinner
Oct 28th 2009
5
Lovin' Your Haikus
Oct 28th 2009
6
Homicidal Crook, I enjoyed that haiku
Oct 29th 2009
7
danger
Oct 31st 2009
9
RE: danger
Nov 11th 2009
12
scandalous
Nov 08th 2009
10
RE: moving: a haiku
Nov 09th 2009
11
pet owner
Nov 11th 2009
13

ASIEM
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Mon Oct-26-09 08:12 PM

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1. "RE: moving: a haiku"
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i will be watchin
checkin syllables
feelin style
you know




"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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BarTek
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Tue Oct-27-09 11:08 AM

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2. "your haiku.."
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is full of sweet sentiment.. lots of hope and exciting... good luck! i wish you the best...

let's play ping pong ■

  

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mindful
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4. "thank you kindly man, I'm over here overwhelmed w/ joy :) nm"
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BarTek
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8. "change is a wonderful thing and never ends! :)"
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!

let's play ping pong ■

  

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mindful
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3. "autumn "
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Wed Oct-28-09 05:42 PM by mindful

  

          

leaves of golden brown
crowds the dewy grass making
beautiful blankets.

©Tremaine L. Loadholt 28October09


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Homicidal Crook
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Wed Oct-28-09 06:38 PM

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5. "Dinner"
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Aroma filled room
napkins neatly set
hunger meets death

Only God can judge me - 2Pac

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Wed Oct-28-09 09:15 PM

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6. "Lovin' Your Haikus"
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So ...

Where ya going? -- *moving*


You might've said already, but I musta missed it --




A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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mindful
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Thu Oct-29-09 06:24 AM

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7. "Homicidal Crook, I enjoyed that haiku"
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*it's missing 5 syllables in the last line though, if you were going for traditional... Loved it though, loved it!*

Photo~ I'm just moving to another apartment complex, but it is in a nicer part of town (much nicer), has better amenities, and dog walking areas all over complete w/ poop bags and dispensers, etc... It's all around better for me and I'm pretty stoked about it~ Thanks for reading you guys!

  

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mindful
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9. "danger"
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gun shots fired, here
lies another broken heart
no one left to love.

©Tremaine L. Loadholt 31October09

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Homicidal Crook
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12. "RE: danger"
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Sad but true

Only God can judge me - 2Pac

  

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mindful
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10. "scandalous"
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he lied about love,
crushed her heart and stomped on it.
blood-splattered scandal.

©Tremaine L. Loadholt 08October09

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gsquared
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Mon Nov-09-09 09:51 PM

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11. "RE: moving: a haiku"
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Very cool, it really conveys the feeling!

  

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mindful
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13. "pet owner"
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the vet bill is here.
who knew antacids would be
the expensive cure.

©Tremaine L. Loadholt 11October09



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