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wonluv
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Wed Sep-23-09 11:01 AM

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"passing time..."


  

          

i get mo' potent with time; stay open
every time i rhyme i surpass the quotient
way pass the block and the rock, and the glock
a presidential emcee, my name in ya ballot box
.....

finish later

~sicknature~ My financial skills/discipline need Jesus. -J-Skivvy

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lol @ finish later
Sep 23rd 2009
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RE: passing time...
Nov 11th 2009
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mindful
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Wed Sep-23-09 06:37 PM

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1. "lol @ finish later"
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yeah... b/c that ended way too fast... I liked the last line though, very much so.

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PhotoSynthesis
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Wed Nov-11-09 08:05 PM

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2. "RE: passing time..."
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Now see ... I just created a thread with a bunch a' bits and pieces like ^this^ ... that I had chicken scratched on paper ... I never finished em' -- so I'm just knittin' them together in that thread ...

But I agree with mindful ... U need to finish this one!


Nice way to pass time with a hella nice lil' rhyme ... *YeP*



*Come Again*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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