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Zion3Lion
Member since Dec 23rd 2002
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Tue Jul-07-09 11:06 AM

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"Luscious Agony/ Visions"


  

          

My first time ever posting in here
Here's two of my favorite pieces I wrote


Luscious Agony

Slow Breaths
As we
Look,
Touch,
Kiss,
Lick,
Rub,
Caress,
Massage,
Tease,
Spread,
Enter,
Grind,
Thrust,
Stroke,
Push,
Pull
Moan,
Scream
Explode,
Convulse,
Shudder,
Tremble,
Collapse
In
Luscious
Agony

© Zion3Lion

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Visions

Screaming at the top of my lungs
But nobody hears me
Having visions of my own brother fearing me
Feeling the weight
Upon my chest
Of the trials and tribulations of the world
Or
Maybe it's just these visions
Creating di-visions
Between me & myself
The physical and spiritual
Bombarding my brain waves
Denying the peace my soul craves
Trapping me in bondage
Making me mentally a slave
So like a daily ritual
I wage battle on a mental and physical plane
My soul constantly in turmoil
And maybe it will be that way
Until I return to the soil

© Zion3Lion

  

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Lovely ...
Jul 07th 2009
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thanks, glad you enjoyed them :)
Jul 07th 2009
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RE: Luscious Agony/ Visions
Jul 08th 2009
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PhotoSynthesis
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Tue Jul-07-09 05:30 PM

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*Absolutely*

Both of them ---

... and (((WELCOME)))



A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Zion3Lion
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Tue Jul-07-09 10:10 PM

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HueyNewton
Member since Feb 27th 2005
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Wed Jul-08-09 03:36 PM

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after I read these I took a deep breath and {} exhaled, nice work!

this ain't no melrose place!
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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