She said that I had become a part of her routine…

I was thinking damn … I lose … see my moves
were with the only intentions on making her my muse …
and to abuse ….the situation and misuse ….
her for validation …purposes

No worries in this here …
As she slipped into silk … then comfy’d next to my chest…
The rise and fall of her breast .. With every breath …
Had me anticipating .. The caress of her touch …
To find myself finessing
the finer features of her anatomy…with the softest finger’s touch …
Seem a bit much ….but …she requested my signature

I must have injected more me …than I wanted …
I must have traced an outline of times
When passed poets …promised and missed
Then colored them in … with subtle shakes of green …

Cause now she saw herself growing with me …
And recognized herself growing in me … and on me …
I smelt of the sweet nectarine for weeks
As hands traced cheeks … like beards
And the thunder rolls chase off fears …
We posed as if the lightening were camera flashes …
The God’s are watching … like paparazzi …
And we are in action ….
I wondered about the God’s reactions …
And pondered the mathematics…
That equated … this …. Business.

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nice to pop in here and see a familiar face even if its yours

that was dope and i liked the math/business metaphor at the end

hope all is well in your world

-peace

and to see you in the reply box was .... crazy .... I'm good man hows everything with you ... in the rap game ....

i much older now ... don't rhyme much but i still try to force something out every now and then ..... good to see your still alive and kicking

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have barely had time to write rhymes since finishing up college, but i am writing a lot of other stuff

glad to hear things are good with you too. really liking that fret noise poem too

...(the end)...

Captivating.

@asiaradiant

the scrolling sig made me wanna not reply chasin that shit was a task but cause i never seen it in here n recognise the genious if intended i had to drop this line
an autograph asked for and given is one thing but one that is written on the tablets of a soul watching is something special...

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

I *know* you're good ... as an Emcee Freestylist, Rapper, or whateva you wanna call it -- but as a poet ... You're EXCELLENT! --

... and it's always nice to see the other side of your poetic eclipses -- *Yuuuup*


May I have your autograph? --

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

thanks to the people still reading and at least saying something....

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you always been nice with the rhymes fam but them poems is stunnas too...this was a vicious lil drop here champ...i see you kingpin...lol...peace

"dude, the only thing i fear is your hair cut.. what is that a mop glued to your head? come on man... style up."-Bartek

all across ya forhead and cheek bones...i break facials and reconstruct beauty to ugly...im an artist mang...Lincoln Picasso Van Gogh

it always meant more coming from you cause we cut no corners with each other .... and not that er body else was shit... just that i know you know we don't blow smoke up each others asses

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Duno what to say really, was unexpected, yea the metaphor was killer,but damn i didtn expetc it from u zin, not asying ur not capable of, we kno u r, just the way u came with it, stay up, u even had hdub drop by for it...

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

Zin, I definitely adored this and felt as though this was somewhat out of your regular style of posting and I appreciated the difference...

especially w/ these lines:

I must have injected more me …than I wanted …
I must have traced an outline of times
When passed poets …promised and missed
Then colored them in … with subtle shakes of green …

Cause now she saw herself growing with me …
And recognized herself growing in me … and on me …
I smelt of the sweet nectarine for weeks
As hands traced cheeks … like beards
And the thunder rolls chase off fears …
We posed as if the lightening were camera flashes …
The God’s are watching … like paparazzi …
And we are in action ….
I wondered about the God’s reactions …
And pondered the mathematics…
That equated … this …. Business.

they seemed to display a full moon of talent you didn't seem unafraid to share. Thanks for that. Peace~

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lifetime is to be true to yourself ©Richard Bach

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