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DeToXwHiTe
Member since Apr 10th 2009
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Thu Jun-04-09 06:27 PM

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"UFC(comment)sat for 30 min and wrote this up. "


  

          

religon
battle over some higher vison
death imprisonment
lunitic in the mind of a submission
mui tie insension
defintion of perfection is intelligence
suspence ; grip of the consequence
conscious slippin grip of the head spent
eventually blackness gonna be advent
adventually that half spent knee 'crack and split'
MMA championship
Mad Murder Act of the -violent-
conviction to intent some punishment
street fights now be acting with title hits
happening to be colabrating with counter quicks
1234 then hit the floor on six
six times it took you to pick up all your sticks
simplistic arithmetics
killin every spit
saliva spraying venom getting fevers from the head of my tick.
Ha..
now thats irrelevant
i thought i could try it ,shit.





$DeToXwHiTe$

"Soon As My Flow Starts I Compose Art Like The Ghost Of Mozart"-SLim SHady

  

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Heyyyyyyy ...
Jun 05th 2009
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yeah most def ....
Jun 05th 2009
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PhotoSynthesis
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Fri Jun-05-09 06:48 PM

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1. "Heyyyyyyy ..."
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This was relatively nice, DeTox ... I see improvement already in ya flow.

But ...

Are you familiar with: http://www.google.com/

See ...

You can type in the word that you wanna check the spelling of -- Like "lunitic" -- and then hit the SEARCH button.

It comes back with ... Did you mean: lunatic -- so you click on the word lunatic ... and it gives you a definition to confirm that ... that's the word you wanna use.

There ain't no spell~check on OKP ... but if you polish up your spelling ... your flows will definitely show an improvement ... then all you'll have to do is work on your e-line cadence and flow~style patterns.


*Improvement Noted*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Zin
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Fri Jun-05-09 06:55 PM

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lil bit

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