I watched your fingernails, piercing another's skin Told myself it was but a dream but found the truth hiding within I don't know what it means But I think I'm gonna sin...
I woke the other night from the dream of another life I found what I was looking for Caught my breath while I lost my sight I closed the window, slammed the door cause I found what I was looking for
I watched your fingernails, piercing another's skin Told myself it was but a dream but found the truth hiding within I don't know what it means But I know I'm gonna sin
I think I always knew exactly what I was gonna do I think I gave up hope every time I fell for you I shoulda known that too good to be true
Means too good to be you
I watched your fingernails, piercing another's skin Told myself it was but a dream but found the truth hiding within I don't know what it means But I can't live with the sin
The sin you gave to me with every second You were craving me you bathed in me I gave to be in I was made to be....
Your sin.
"What is done in love always takes place beyond good and evil." -- Nietzsche
Didnt know what to expect, especially the ending, had a little twist to it, and the way you structured it, its like i kept readin faster as it progressed, like i wanted to know where it was goin.. not sure if anyone else saw it like that though.. stay up man
Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az
This certainly "sounds" DEEP -- But I still ain't too sure exactly whatcha talkin' 'bout ...
I have to agree with ak ... I was readin' faster and faster, tryna get to the end ... the punchline so to speak ... but then ... I wanted to read it all over again ... cuz I felt like I missed summthin' --
I'm just tired ... but I'll be back for a review.
*Intriguing*
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
3. "you kind sir, are one very good writer" In response to Reply # 0
case and point:
I think I always knew exactly what I was gonna do I think I gave up hope every time I fell for you I shoulda known that too good to be true
Means too good to be you
I watched your fingernails, piercing another's skin Told myself it was but a dream but found the truth hiding within I don't know what it means But I can't live with the sin
The sin you gave to me with every second You were craving me you bathed in me I gave to be in I was made to be....
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