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ak_reborn
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Sat May-09-09 09:50 AM

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"Self Evaluation Pt 2"


  

          



I stand abrupt at the sight of a man,
reciting my hand,
and fighting all the troubles i am,
why damn?
amplfiying all the struggle i faced,
since a troublesome case,
why bother try to pover my state,
and still as if theres nothing to gain, touching my chain,
seems probable, though logical, I muster my name,
to encrust all the fame with garbage,
my rep was tarnished,
and yet somehow managed to harness,
the chakra to excel beyond the artist,
the pompa to conquer, and still evoked all the monsters,
and wrong doers to listen words,
reflective of verbs, metaphors and learn,
and still cant serve the justice,
thus reason i must quit,
if i cant break the lungs grip,
to be free in the game...



Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
I C U -- *Self Evaluating*
May 10th 2009
1
RE: I C U -- *Self Evaluating*
May 11th 2009
3
RE: Self Evaluation Pt 2
May 10th 2009
2

PhotoSynthesis
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Sun May-10-09 12:51 AM

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1. "I C U -- *Self Evaluating*"
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>to encrust all the fame with garbage,
>my rep was tarnished,
>and yet somehow managed to harness,
>the chakra to excel beyond the artist,
>the pompa to conquer, and still evoked all the monsters,
>and wrong doers to listen words,
>reflective of verbs, metaphors and learn,


*Yes Sir*


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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ak_reborn
Member since Sep 24th 2005
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Mon May-11-09 06:37 PM

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Thanks, it means alot coming from you two, both respected writers here.

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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ASIEM
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Sun May-10-09 07:12 PM

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u definitely wirk verbage to higher levels

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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