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MarVeL
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Mon Apr-27-09 07:00 PM

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"U-dot, S-dot (a brief autobiographical piece)"


  

          


Raised in the U-dot, S-dot
Father was a Vietnam vet
whose stress got the better of his head
I was 3 when he had the aneurysm-
mannerisms changed
But I'm glad my daddy wasn't dead
-Skip ahead-
And my mother did 20 years of service as well
See... and here's thing, me and dad were nervous as hell
Cuz after 17-Korea so we didn't get to see her
After 19-Baghdad and I was like "Dag dad..."
...And you could find me glarin' at the flag staff
Feelin' really sorry for myself
was somethin' I could hardly help
That's until my father fell to the floor
His heart stopped.
I wasn't sweatin' myself anymore
And there was anger at first
I'd get frustrated and curse
at that triangular flag
They gave my mom at the church
And the hurt
Was sensational in '05
but four years later its inspirational
And THAT'S no jive
Raised in the U-dot, S-dot,
A military brat
Been through alotta rest stops
But I killed the test
So I'm proudly gonna follow in your steps, Pops.








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Subject Author Message Date ID
I feel you
Apr 28th 2009
1
We've made alot of the same sacrifices though.
Apr 28th 2009
2
I Salute You !
Apr 28th 2009
3
Air Force for me.
Apr 28th 2009
4
      RE: Air Force for me.
Apr 29th 2009
5

Laz aka Black Native
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Tue Apr-28-09 01:17 AM

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1. "I feel you"
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Both my parents were in the military. My father did about 21 years and my mom 18. When I was about 5 they had to go to Kuwait during Desert Storm/Shield. Though I can't relate with losing my father or any medical conditions happening afterward, I am a military brat and I understand where you're coming from. Good stuff mayne!!!

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MarVeL
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Tue Apr-28-09 10:26 AM

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That's cool man thanks for sharing.





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PhotoSynthesis
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Tue Apr-28-09 06:07 PM

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3. "I Salute You !"
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>So I'm proudly gonna follow in your steps, Pops.

If indeed ^that^ IS the case

My lil' bro's in the Marines ... been in since he was 17 -- (he's 26 now)

From what I've seen, the military kinda sharpens up the rough edges and polishes areas that parents might've missed, nahmean?

Not that you need any sharpening or polishing ... but I'm just saying ...


*Nice Flow Fa' Sho'* -- and thanx 4 sharing.




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MarVeL
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Tue Apr-28-09 08:50 PM

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But yeah I'm sure I need a little sharpening lol.


Thanks for reading.




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ak_reborn
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Wed Apr-29-09 01:16 PM

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5. "RE: Air Force for me."
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Wed Apr-29-09 01:17 PM by ak_reborn

  

          

Yh my pops/dad whateva u wanna call it, he was in the army too, except i wasnt alive to knw it, so i cant share your feelings, tho others prolly can.

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