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pelicanz
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Sat Apr-11-09 06:17 PM

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"you shouldnt read this..."


  

          

or maybe u should

I have cocktails with death sip juices with hell
Introduce marijuana with cash, prostitutes and jail
Talk to my immune system tell him to fix up my health
Tell poverty i don't like him no more my best friend is wealth
My self and virtues are deceased my vices have flourished
I divorced my fear so im allowed to marry courage
My self duels death and has beef with vanity
As my brain walked out on me and took away my sanity
Like a moment of clarity anger returns from its sentence
Plots to overthrow tranquil in a swift act of vengeance
My jealousy is senseless killin my faculty of reason
And it remains defenceless as it carries out his treason
I say something but my eyes say something else
I verbalise lies but my lips quiver truth against my self
My deeds are drilling holes in this wall of sin i built
But my heart testifies against me and speaks of my guilt
I had a conversation with pride as he rose to speak
He told me im great and called humility a freak
I asked lust a question i said why are you so horny
He sighly replied because celebacy kinda bores me
I looked at the cuts on my wrist from the sword of time
The pain of the slashes was worse than the bullet of a nine
Time told me words of truth told me the secrets of ten men
Told me i'm my greatest enemy and my best friend
Contentment reaches a dead end and its offspring or seed
Feeds the always hungry appetite of greed
My skins tarnished by slavery that my heart pumps bravoury
Wrath injects itself slowly till my tastes turn savoury
My confidence commits suicide and takes trust with it
My humour is assasinated and leaves a empty hole in my spirit
Hope was lucky to be handicapped but faith rows on
My soul finally decides enough and says so long

  

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Yes I Should ...
Apr 15th 2009
1
lol, yeah u use webster we use oxford.
Apr 21st 2009
lol, yeah u use webster we use oxford.
Apr 21st 2009
2
RE: you shouldnt read this...
Apr 21st 2009
3
thanks, ima respond to yours when i get a chance.
Apr 23rd 2009
8
RE: you shouldnt read this...
Apr 21st 2009
4
thanks bruh
Apr 24th 2009
9
Satisfactory work......
Apr 23rd 2009
5
lol it might be, thanks for reading
Apr 27th 2009
10
RE: you shouldnt read this...
Apr 23rd 2009
6
thanks ma, much appreciated.
Apr 23rd 2009
7

PhotoSynthesis
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Wed Apr-15-09 12:20 AM

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1. "Yes I Should ..."
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... and I did .... TWICE! --

Clever trickle of brain cell~age ... leaking from your cerebellum.


I like reading ish from you guys in the UK, with words like:

bravoury
savoury
&
humour

We don't usually stick that extra "U" in our words like that ... but its kool --

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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pelicanz
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Tue Apr-21-09 07:34 AM

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"lol, yeah u use webster we use oxford."


  

          

thanks for the feedback, much appreciated.

  

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pelicanz
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Tue Apr-21-09 07:34 AM

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2. "lol, yeah u use webster we use oxford."
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thanks for the feedback, much appreciated.

  

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HueyNewton
Member since Feb 27th 2005
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Tue Apr-21-09 02:15 PM

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3. "RE: you shouldnt read this..."
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a journey of metaphors that said "STAND UP" . . glad I read it!

big up to brooklyn!
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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pelicanz
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Thu Apr-23-09 10:35 AM

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8. "thanks, ima respond to yours when i get a chance."
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ASIEM
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Tue Apr-21-09 05:41 PM

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4. "RE: you shouldnt read this..."
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you dipped into clevervoyance of words real well

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

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pelicanz
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Fri Apr-24-09 09:09 AM

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9. "thanks bruh"
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Laz aka Black Native
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Thu Apr-23-09 12:35 AM

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5. "Satisfactory work......"
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i guess this is one of those times where NOT doing what's suggested paid off.

Furious Styles: https://blacknative.bandcamp.com/album/furious-styles

Black Confederate on iTunes:
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Video to Black Confederate: http://youtu.be/jbpAQ4qzkqY

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pelicanz
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Mon Apr-27-09 06:31 AM

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10. "lol it might be, thanks for reading"
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alyriki
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Thu Apr-23-09 12:55 AM

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i'm glad i don't follow directions lol this is dope

a lyrical kind
- Alyriki -

  

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pelicanz
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7. "thanks ma, much appreciated."
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