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Free2Fly
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Wed Mar-11-09 01:58 PM

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"The Deep Blue"


  

          

As I sit under the stars
Captivated by your creation
I find peace in knowing my own perfection
Jus as you made the ocean
You made it so in making your own creation
That which is me, oh how I praise Thee
Some days I fail to thank you
Focusing on my normalcy
But when it all comes together
What arises is an exquisite flower.
I’m amazed at the waves
As they “crash into me”
And still I’m standing
Not phased by the aggression
The moon gives me light
To see far into the night
Unsure as to what’s to come when the sun arises
But sitting here in the midst of you…I know whatever’s to come I am with you
That’s Peace…
The Deep Blue you inspire me
Your hues of blues, greens and all the colors in between
Make me want to know the more intricate parts of me
I want to delve deep within
I want no parts of the shallow end
As I swim deeper and deeper
I know we are one in the same
There is no separation from my beginning and your end
A beautiful creation
Therefore, I say, Peace unto you

Deep Blue

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Lesson Learned...

  

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RE: The Deep Blue
Mar 12th 2009
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I thought the ending was the most
Mar 12th 2009
2
Thank you for reading...
Mar 16th 2009
3
RE: The Deep Blue
Mar 17th 2009
4

PhotoSynthesis
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Thu Mar-12-09 05:37 PM

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1. "RE: The Deep Blue"
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Peace~full Indeed! -- *Yes It Is*


~Tranquility In Da Mixxx~


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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mindful
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Thu Mar-12-09 07:36 PM

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2. "I thought the ending was the most"
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poignant of the poem... The imagery is abundant in this one, but my fave lines are as follows:

The Deep Blue you inspire me
Your hues of blues, greens and all the colors in between
Make me want to know the more intricate parts of me
I want to delve deep within
I want no parts of the shallow end
As I swim deeper and deeper
I know we are one in the same
There is no separation from my beginning and your end
A beautiful creation

*nods*

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behind every idiot ©John Lennon

  

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Free2Fly
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Mon Mar-16-09 10:34 AM

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Photo and Mindful - your words are appreciated

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ASIEM
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Tue Mar-17-09 01:18 PM

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and in u there is peace thanks

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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