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Intrepid Vixen
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Sun Jan-04-09 06:36 PM

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"The Love Experience"


  

          

The LOve Experience

On any giving day breeze
carries my mood out a window
I'm feeling words at the moment
float in like much needed friends

come sit and partake in
early morning rituals

I'm looking for something that compliments my skin
what better hue then love?
(you)

in colors though we mesh
from differences we have emerged
mended fences

healing hands have gathered me up
in a grip of hope i have slept among true peace
and decided you were worth all the best of me

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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Missed your pen..
Jan 04th 2009
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RE: Missed your pen..
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Welcome back....
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RE: Welcome back....
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RE: The Love Experience
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Universadevine
Member since Mar 14th 2003
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Sun Jan-04-09 07:45 PM

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1. "Missed your pen.."
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I Luh luh loved these lines...

"I'm looking for something that compliments my skin
what better hue then love?
(you)"


I have spent my life gathering words as rays of sunlight, I offer them to the dawn I see in you..Muhammad Muwakil

http://www.jalanimorgan.com/
**This cat is ill wit the camera

  

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Intrepid Vixen
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Mon Jan-05-09 11:46 AM

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2. "RE: Missed your pen.."
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Ahh, thank you. I appreciate your look.
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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KnowOne
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Mon Jan-05-09 11:54 AM

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3. "Welcome back...."
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good to read from you again.

Keep Flowin' Sis.

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"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

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Intrepid Vixen
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4. "RE: Welcome back...."
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Thank you! It's good to be back!
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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the_best_part
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Tue Jan-06-09 08:43 AM

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5. "RE: The Love Experience"
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ha! this is so refreshing. beautifully so.

  

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Intrepid Vixen
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6. "RE: The Love Experience"
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Thanks, Asia! *blushes* lol
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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deepthought74
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Thu Jan-08-09 11:47 AM

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7. "RE: The Love Experience"
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Im digging this piece...I love this line right here wow

I'm looking for something that compliments my skin
what better hue then love?
(you)

Deepthought

"When I hear wack rhymes, I get fed up"- Krs-One

"Even when I'm bragging, I'm being sincere"-LL

Verse One:

Could you tell me who released our animal instinct?
Got the white man sittin' there tickled pink.
Laughin' at us on the av

  

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DeeKay
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Thu Jan-08-09 12:25 PM

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8. "RE: The Love Experience"
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>I'm looking for something that compliments my skin
>what better hue then love?
>(you)

>in colors though we mesh
>from differences we have emerged
>mended fences

>healing hands have gathered me up
>in a grip of hope i have slept among true peace
>and decided you were worth all the best of me

Very nice! Especially the first couple of lines I quoted (ending "what better hue than love"),I really liked that. Quite a touching poem I think.

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Intrepid Vixen
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Thu Jan-08-09 01:12 PM

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9. "RE: The Love Experience"
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Thank you for the feeback Deepthought and Deekay. Always much appreciated and truly missed. DeeKay I'm reading your stuff now.

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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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HueyNewton
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Thu Jan-08-09 02:07 PM

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10. "RE: The Love Experience"
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cold weather love is on vacation in the bahamas, 98 degrees . .

hangin' out with the artsy crowd
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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Intrepid Vixen
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11. "RE: The Love Experience"
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I wish I was in the Bahamas now. lol
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then One cannot be broken.

  

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midnightstar
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Tue Jan-13-09 02:35 PM

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12. "RE: The Love Experience"
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This world without Love?
or Life without Love?

anything with no love is just miserable

R.I.Piece Babynoon

  

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Intrepid Vixen
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Tue Jan-13-09 08:22 PM

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13. "RE: The Love Experience"
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I agree.
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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