This is bad
Now I see it
Sad

1 year back
Not blindness
turned my vision to
dark

Now I see it

See back then my own thing was
the nail to the cross

Someone gave me a knoose and said "join me
give it up"

Now I see it

Hell on earth
and it's been, but now that it is at worst

Make Him the President
We need what ever works

They hurt the poor
and it made earth worse

They played hangman
Before the last leg

What a life this has become

No work
No money
No giving

Family members are dying fast
& there's more sicknesses in the air

Blue skies clinging to life
Partly choking from Carbon M

Are we really dying?

No
we've come closer to, Purpose.

nice twist a reality check

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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did you choose it to indicate changes, both rough and fluid?

favorite lines:

Make Him the President
We need what ever works

They hurt the poor
and it made earth worse

They played hangman
Before the last leg

What a life this has become

No work
No money
No giving

Family members are dying fast
& there's more sicknesses in the air

Blue skies clinging to life
Partly choking from Carbon M

Are we really dying?

nice piece...*nods*

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or die ©Mitch Albom

yeah.. i felt this piece... your furthest out when the tide changes and starts bringing you back to shore..
...let us defintely hope so..