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Zin
Member since Jan 21st 2004
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Thu Dec-11-08 06:26 PM

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"Crash Course"


  

          


My words collide with brains like joy rides that end with the air bags expired …
when the driver survives but the passenger dies …and the eyes
that read this scan with the rapid eye movement
Of the sleeping beauty…
And herb these gap teeth Huckstables ..like rudy
On butterfly wings I begin…and end as a tidal waves …
kinetics multiplied
So I’m your last post times two
And you too …can get taken
With the ignition exposed…
My codes …
live in coed dorms …
something like any and everyone
man or woman …
I chase ‘em like nottyhead …
Split ‘em like O.J.
That’s Orenthal…
Ayo
‘Zin a bad boy poster original …
fuck what I say in the booth I WILL give it to you…
minuscule …
in a matter of mintues
I’ll make my mission …
Menstrual …
And erase dudes like the ends of number 2 pencils …
And give a g4 fuck if I offend you …

sig.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Guess who's Back

  

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RE: Crash Course
Dec 11th 2008
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RE: Crash Course
Dec 12th 2008
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RE: Crash Course
Dec 12th 2008
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Dec 12th 2008
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RE: Crash Course
Apr 05th 2009
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Dec 12th 2008
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RE: Crash Course
Dec 27th 2008
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RE: Crash Course
Jan 04th 2009
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There U Go ....
Mar 08th 2009
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ak_reborn
Member since Sep 24th 2005
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Thu Dec-11-08 06:29 PM

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1. "RE: Crash Course"
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What can say that you dont always hear?
its just more fire.

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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ASIEM
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Fri Dec-12-08 12:57 PM

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2. "RE: Crash Course"
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the opening was so potent and seems in another direction then where it went yet your writing often has 'mind bends' that strike rapidly
and changes quickly a style all your own


My words collide with brains like joy rides that end with the air bags expired …
when the driver survives but the passenger dies …and the eyes
that read this scan with the rapid eye movement

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

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HueyNewton
Member since Feb 27th 2005
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Fri Dec-12-08 04:11 PM

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it's always better to give than receive, yeah cool flow . .

the rhythm of compassion
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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godsweat
Member since Jan 16th 2008
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Fri Dec-12-08 04:19 PM

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4. "RE: Crash Course"
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my words...
unbreakable
fracturing frail fakes
trash tossed at snakes that tailgate
my caliber, shell casing
nomenclature of the stock sends them to Hells gate
this is snails pace...
slowed it down
lowered my keystrokes..
you still couldn't hold it down
cats puttin on heirs
still couldn't hold the crown
Phelps of the penship
hold your nose, you drown..
i lapped you
you played yourself...
i didn't have to
nothing to see here
act two...

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Sun Apr-05-09 09:59 AM

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9. "RE: Crash Course"
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godsweat ... you got it goin' on in here too, yaknow? ...


^UP^ for both a' y'all -- *yeahhhh boyz*


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Pit Bull
Member since Oct 23rd 2006
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Fri Dec-12-08 04:30 PM

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I like the vocabulary and direction changes here.

Nice.

"What is done in love always takes place beyond good and evil." -- Nietzsche

  

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Otto
Member since Dec 19th 2002
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Sat Dec-27-08 02:18 PM

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zin, your flows are always a crash course in bad ass flowin...i'm retarted compared to you.

  

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Intrepid Vixen
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Sun Jan-04-09 02:55 PM

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7. "RE: Crash Course"
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I knew I was going to come back and have your works contain the same potency as when I left.

My words collide with brains like joy rides that end with the air bags expired …
when the driver survives but the passenger dies …and the eyes
that read this scan with the rapid eye movement
Of the sleeping beauty…

I see me and Asiem both like the above. That right there was extremely and mind pleasing.
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Sun Mar-08-09 04:36 PM

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8. "There U Go ...."
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Flowin' like a mac truck:

>Zin a bad boy poster original …
>fuck what I say in the booth I WILL give it to you…
>minuscule …
>in a matter of mintues
>I’ll make my mission …
>Menstrual …
>And erase dudes like the ends of number 2 pencils …
>And give a g4 fuck if I offend you …


I'm Offended --


Tight Flow Don'tchaknow -- *Yuuup*




A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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