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Babynoon
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"WarNing SigNs"
Mon Dec-08-08 09:34 AM by Babynoon

          

Seen the rapture before its tango'
commercial groups surrounding my footsteps
the heat is on
Readying under this storm'
whims of an airy formation
in a breezy dorm there in a room
being taught by a dream

a vision
a theme

then love gone mean
wicked & evil came from my soul
in efforts to protect it and grow

and the approach was not evol
here is love not 2-1-but-2-all

they turn against it to
then less is better than none

though it's now feeling good in my soul
letting go
letting go

and awful is my mind to see then the world end
because we don't deserve God's love

people are fools
and i want to hate them all for there ignorant roles

before black went gold
i feel sold
by the devil's happiness
the threats against my purpose arose

here i stood and them below

I release them old tunes
to feed your souls
with grief

i am sorry, but i need relief.

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RE: WarNing SigNs
Dec 08th 2008
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RE: WarNing SigNs
Dec 08th 2008
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RE: WarNing SigNs (butter version)
Dec 09th 2008
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Love4Lyricz
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Mon Dec-08-08 03:40 PM

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1. "RE: WarNing SigNs"
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Amen!!! Gone get if off yo' chest,and pray that every soul comes to true repentance.

I feel the conviction,and I'm impatient,gotta stop my excuses and hesitation,So heaven instead of hell can be my final destination...

  

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Mon Dec-08-08 08:14 PM

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2. "RE: WarNing SigNs"
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this was ill
i had to read it twice before i got what you were saying

my fav lines

"they turn against it to
then less is better than none

though it's now feeling good in my soul
letting go
letting go

and awful is my mind to see then the world end
because we don't deserve God's love

people are fools
and i want to hate them all for there ignorant roles

before black went gold
i feel sold
by the devil's happiness
the threats against my purpose arose

here i stood and them below"

vivid imagery saying so much with so little

  

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Babynoon
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Tue Dec-09-08 06:15 PM

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3. "RE: WarNing SigNs (butter version)"
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Thankyou for feedback

and

this was a sugary version contrast to what was deeply felt, but either way it felt good to 'let it all just go

ps: ahhh

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