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alyriki
Member since Mar 13th 2008
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Mon Nov-03-08 11:21 AM

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"The Bright Side"


  

          

i'm just trying,
trying to find the bright side
tryin to find that silver lining
just one reason for smiling
i'm trying

i can't breath in here
i'm starting to get that notting feeling in my stomach
sweaty palms
heart racinging
i feel the the sting of tears
i try to hold back
but the ocean of emotion i've been swimmin in is overwhelming
the waves beat against me till i'm too weak to fight


the dam breaks
the leavy fails
and here comes the flood
i'm drowning in here
i'm broken hearted and i can't breath
thoughts of failure are all i think
the rush floods from my head to my feet
and all i can think is run

run from my problems
hope some one else solves them
cuz i can't deal
it's fight or flight and i have no streanght left to yeild
god help me
i'm not sure i can do this
i've been clinging to sanity
but it's not to sturdy

something's pulling me down
it would be easier to let myself drown
but who am i to take the easy way out?
there's a silver lining somewhere...
right?
a bright side?

a lyrical kind
- Alyriki -

  

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RE: The Bright Side
Nov 26th 2008
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Wed Nov-26-08 07:50 AM

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1. "RE: The Bright Side"
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i feel you.. there is defintely a bright side on the other side of the horison.. hoping this finds you finding it at this very moment..

nice piece..

would have liked to see it go deeper.. like
what exactly the dark side your experiencing and
what do you think the bright side might look like when you find it?

just thoughts
hope all is well

^up^

  

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