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Universadevine
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Thu Aug-07-08 04:16 PM

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"Your on my mind again..."


          


Is it right that I still think of you late nights?
Resuscitating love in a dream/
My heart still pumps to the rhythm of you
Holding you in high esteem/
You define true swagger
I’m not even trying to compare you
But inside the lining of my soul you wrote
Your name/
And the footprints of our time in eternity grace my hall of fame/
None can come close
Love is alive in its innocents
And beside the risk of failure, disappointment and disillusion
Love still triumphs
I know this your love lives/
I walk forward to see what the universe gives/
Though I want to press rewind
Revive the path that I met you on/ during the blissful evening of the dawn/
I must continue on my journey
I hope for you only the best
I just wanted you to know
I think of you before I lay to rest.



"WHEN YOU DO THE COMMON THINGS IN LIFE IN AN UNCOMMON WAY, YOU WILL COMMAND THE ATTENTION OF THE WORLD."
-George Washington Carver

  

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RE: Your on my mind again...
Aug 11th 2008
1
thxs
Aug 11th 2008
2
      yes
Aug 12th 2008
3

Decstar
Member since Jan 22nd 2003
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Mon Aug-11-08 12:14 PM

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1. "RE: Your on my mind again..."
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good to see love still exists in such a beautiful form

this was hot

nice piece

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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Universadevine
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Mon Aug-11-08 08:29 PM

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2. "thxs"
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for the love curious

"One team, one mind, one person, one soul"

these words from your sig have you ever written a piece on em?


I have spread my dreams under your feet;
Thread softly because you may tread on my dreams

"WHEN YOU DO THE COMMON THINGS IN LIFE IN AN UNCOMMON WAY, YOU WILL COMMAND THE ATTENTION OF THE WORLD."
-George Washington Carver

  

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Decstar
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Tue Aug-12-08 09:47 AM

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3. "yes"
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it's actually a quote from something i did with a board member, Mara. i wrote a poem for her and then we did a collab and that was one of the lines i did. it may be in tha archives, i doubt it, tho

thank you
peaces

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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