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Universadevine
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Fri Jul-18-08 02:52 PM

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"aND ANOTHER 1"
Fri Jul-18-08 03:08 PM by Universadevine

          

I’m the kinda lady dude’s may pass up/
First they attracted
Then they get hooked cause I’m so chill/
They wanna tear dis ass up/
But, I know who I am
So I don’t get gassed up/
Dat’s what’s up

The closer I get
I’m faced with the reality
I'mma have to balance my energies alone.

Tired of opening the doors for the wrong dude/
To sit and my table and eat my cooked food/
When he can’t man up/
But on the real I ain’t sad no more
I've found my home.
I’m all grown up/
Holler if you will but
You can leave a message at the tone.

It’s not like I didn’t have a clue/
My fairy tale doesn’t end happily ever after with two/
I’m setting my table for something new/
I've pound the pavement on this here avenue

Although this isn’t what my heart desires
And I got many that admire/
One day he'll return my fiyah!!

I’m marching on this journey
I may get weary
I will not retire/
Going up the staircase of life
One-step at a time
My consciousness is higher/
I will acquire/
mineZ
Actually, I already have it
Guess what??
So do you
but we existing in chronological time

and in this realm I’m picky as shieitt !

and another 1

Dovefly




  

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RE: aND ANOTHER 1
Jul 18th 2008
1
RE: aND ANOTHER 1
Jul 19th 2008
2
Thanks for responding...I liked that ..dope flow
Jul 22nd 2008
5
      RE: Thanks for responding...I liked that ..dope flow
Jul 24th 2008
8
i get the feeling this may come off better in audio
Jul 19th 2008
3
RE: i get the feeling this may come off better in audio
Jul 22nd 2008
6
Say That!
Jul 22nd 2008
4
RE: Say That!
Jul 22nd 2008
7
RE: aND ANOTHER 1
Jul 25th 2008
9

FAT PHAT
Member since Jul 18th 2008
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Fri Jul-18-08 06:46 PM

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1. "RE: aND ANOTHER 1"
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YOU JUST KEEP DOIN WHAT YOU DO IT HAS TO GET BETTER

and thats what i mint

  

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godsweat
Member since Jan 16th 2008
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Sat Jul-19-08 01:17 PM

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2. "RE: aND ANOTHER 1"
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with you being so picky
and me screaming " pick me"!
there's bound to be some litany in our parallels
travelling along side like a pair of gel
souls, on different legs
so we'll both get there, just on different sched
duos, don't often remain a team
but they usually rekindle lost desire after a change of scenes


I really enjoyed your piece, it's writings like these that spark and inspire me...keep pennin

  

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Universadevine
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Tue Jul-22-08 09:31 PM

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5. "Thanks for responding...I liked that ..dope flow"
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Wanna callab and post something?

  

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godsweat
Member since Jan 16th 2008
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Thu Jul-24-08 08:34 PM

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8. "RE: Thanks for responding...I liked that ..dope flow"
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Mos def

  

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mindful
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Sat Jul-19-08 02:10 PM

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3. "i get the feeling this may come off better in audio"
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but these bars...

When he can’t man up/
But on the real I ain’t sad no more
I've found my home.
I’m all grown up/
Holler if you will but
You can leave a message at the tone.

It’s not like I didn’t have a clue/
My fairy tale doesn’t end happily ever after with two/
I’m setting my table for something new/
I've pound the pavement on this here avenue


were where it is for me... i liked the tone, the rather nonchalant-ness of it all. digable. Peace~

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now, you put your *dukes* up.

  

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Universadevine
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Tue Jul-22-08 09:33 PM

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6. "RE: i get the feeling this may come off better in audio"
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Yeah your right it was on of those off the dome type..
I appreciate the commments

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Tue Jul-22-08 12:26 AM

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4. "Say That!"
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It's all about YOU -- * * -- And U deserve the BEST!


*No Doubt*



A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Universadevine
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7. "RE: Say That!"
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Ain't that the truth

  

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AidenWaves
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Fri Jul-25-08 01:38 PM

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9. "RE: aND ANOTHER 1"
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ok, so... i'm not ever writing again! LOLROTMFF! seriously, mama, that was ill. it's funny cuz i'm there too. over worring and finding a soul mate and more concerned with my soul. sheer eloquence, my dear. write on, write on!


Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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