see it's not that i don't like poetry or your words let me say this poetic mutha fucka's always got summin to say so many words that fill my ear my heart may even skip beats but it was wordz that i beieved wordz that made me give them all my pussy now dem words fill my mind wit mizery so it aint that i don't like your wordz it really iz me i dropped lines myself trustin they would come back to me return to sender is all i see poetic nicca's make me sick really always got summin to say linked me wit Nefertiiti and Ho'es I really don't know fillin my mind with all kinds of fantasy so brother don't be weary it really aint I don't love those lips that make me wanna sing all the pain away it's just I can't take you seriously so PO fucking etic You are but this sista's seen to much reality to believe...hhmph i wish i could get back the moment i first believed maybe just maybe that poetry you speak would mean something to me... till then wirdz on paper n especially passing gums fall short of where i cummin from damn, could you write me a peace on that?
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
4. "RE: you R so po fuking etic" In response to Reply # 0
hippo hypnotize my wordz flies 24 hours later dead fries live wires tear drops don't drop from dried eyes ruffed up clicks clapping back between the thighs don't understand fair play surprise sending troops form buddha's prize shadow boxing D.C. lies shuffling why you want to die or apply pace makers my come on girls or my video vixen vexed tripping in my own head favorite color red wishing everbody dead my lordshows no compassion my heart never skip beats oh my feet place on yo halo my in steps great dane'n shepards locate and kill my story is G i joe or jane this street hoe yoh her every word i was yoh no fuck it we can't go what you think i'm slow placing stick figures in proper places the devil is my face and every body else so many faces cheeks rose mary read grace was under the shead that shit that keeps pigon's fed a crew of resurrected cold lead pizz dough boys blend what she said rock fish a coke bottle but no kiss thirsting for this
Seems like you took over the mind of a frustrated female -- (demonic posession maybe -- ) -- and wrote her words that lay heavy on her heart -- A heart *broken by multiple poetic suitors* -- (or maybe just ONE) -- But you expressed the agitated angst and frustration very well!
You Devil You! --
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
8. "a poetic response" In response to Reply # 0 Tue Jul-15-08 12:36 AM by ASIEM
eloquence rides the sea of your promise to beckon the truth to aid you in such peril your heart bleeds through my pen for me to slay the dragon that kept you for so long awaken dear soul tender really to my song celestial beings glide across time in remebrance of your warm embrace once found by a small brook where you kissed me the first moment we met, those lips dripped pleasure from my dreams as I spoke in tongues just to teach you the meaning of things held in secret wars began even in the heavens just to behold your beauty never had the face of such innocence been seen before you envy came after we danced among the stars causing a constellation to be born these things we found written on the tables of young lovers seeking our fortune found at the end of rainbows you see dearest after the clouds are moved you will see we made something happen the second we looked into each others eyes and that thing can never be quite defined so it is called L O V E You see sweet tender one the veil that surrounded and kept you for so long fell before my eyes that I could see you never will i risk losing you so hear this whisper I am sitting inside your thoughts waiting for you to ask me to reveal myself to you
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
11. "just in case you believe in what you say..." In response to Reply # 8 Wed Jul-16-08 08:59 PM by ASIEM
I'ma take a chance on you today.... brother i spoke to you in case you did not notice just to let you know I am really paying attention tho i should not break this down I'ma take chance wit you\ i said mutha fukas always got summin to say now being the man you proclaim this went right by you your response again while so aahhhem poetic I sense sincerity in your voice somehow you just might be innocent now if that is the case you reallyn betta think twice about what it is you are doing now let me break you off like you do it
raped molested disgusted at 10 woke up at 11 and found I measure pleasure by how much pain i'm in, simple disguise hide no surprises i grew up gangsta shittin bricks no half mezzure little girls dream i make it happen no time for sleepin now 16 a grown weapon sippin dippin bippin got highs n ho's slangin 17 babies droppin 1,2,3 daddy's boppin holla glockin 21 salute kites flyin still dyin to git mine slow danced she got me in a cell beside me trinkets n commisary no babies or daddy's screams inside bars to wide just creepin they peepin corner hoppin now ridin dayz end 9 years later at a venue smooth playa spittin his words found me wantin slept the night away 3 years later H I V the mutha fucka was gay so please before you say another word do me a favor think about how words changed this day... was that po fucking etic enuff? poof poof i pass
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
14. "another his story lesson." In response to Reply # 11 Thu Jul-17-08 09:08 PM by ASIEM
males beckon females steppin boys jerkin girls lurkin all the pain and joy in between determine who raises the stakes for the man and woman change
sistah caint nobody change what hppened this aint even a words to say I understand it does place a word in time to reflect the moment we both got honest enough to open a door let another close and see life again from a window an opportunity to redefine everything poof poof i pass...
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
12. "RE: a poetic response" In response to Reply # 8
Nice Drop. thanks for Sharing. Here's how I relate:
Can’t seem to forget The Poet Who spoke words Of endearment to the still suffering. Who gave me something I never had before. So I thought! His rhythm seems to suppress my thoughts, Feelings And desires in myself That I’ve become And remain unconscious. Only to turn and Wake to the side where He once slept. How can I feel when all I feel Is Love For real. I pray for the Self Love. Self Assurance Self Esteem All these things I couldn’t give myself. Now I pray for deliverance From captivity of my own mine. To turn fantasy to reality To free myself from what if, if only conscience. To be able to Fly To Soar And Sail One day on my own shirt tail. Now that's Poetic Justice
As soon as healing takes place, go out and heal somebody else. Maya Angelou No man is free until all men are free.
voices srike cords reminding us of what it is all 4 an obsession at dawn keeping pace till dusk overwhelmed in fear only finding distrust no one wins after heartache minds find no ease in seeking instant relief there just aint no reason to die if suicide is the answer what piece is ther on the other side? a poets pen falls dry....
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
>minds find no ease >in seeking instant relief >there just aint no reason >to die if suicide is the answer >what piece is ther on the other side? >a poets pen falls dry.... Just might be the answer when I have considered suicide when the rainbow is enuf. I am ready to die like a lily in the desert/ & i cant let you in on it cuz am to afraid it will hurt again/here is what i have, selfcenteredness/ denial/ resentments/ & so much of it/ it makes me sick. touch wit reality/i dont know anymore. i thot i waz doin it i thot i waz but i waz so stupid i waz able to be hurt & that's not real/not anymore/ i shd be immune/if i'm still alive and tha's what i am feeling/ how i am still alive and my dependency on other livin beins for love i survive on intimacy and tomorrow/ that's all i've got goin and the words waz like dope and you knew that, and still you refused my love Was not enuf. My love is too delicate to have thrown back on my face. So i will die this death only to never return again. No more thrown backs/Free at last.
As soon as healing takes place, go out and heal somebody else. Maya Angelou No man is free until all men are free.
self obsessions gift to me eye only see beyond prison bars not far past misery if eye could make the world revolve around mine eye could be happy for a moment till eye find another reason to blame all others it aint pretty or even cute no more to watch pain gain momentum overtake eyes that really wanna see but still remain to blind with reason a tear falls to earth in hope of finding a seed in need of water
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
17. "RE: you R so po fuking etic" In response to Reply # 0
up 4 da cause
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
20. "RE: you R so po fuking etic" In response to Reply # 0
entire thread cause miracle moments can be captured by the pen..."Be and It IS"
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder