I had the pleasure of entertaining my cousin from Washington during the Memorial Day Holidays -- (She just happens to be a writer, poet, literary snob *if you will*) -- Beautiful girl -- *Gotta Love Her*
I'm glad we are Because I don't "talk" like you With astute articulation that moves mountains And parts hearts like the "red sea" And I don't "walk" like you with that lil' switch That dips to one side and rips lips with pride Licking corners on the inside For composure and a drool~free stride And I don't "look" like you With smooooove mahogany skin & almond eyes Perfectly str8 teeth -- razor incised A *smile* that radiates waves of rapture Captures floating thoughts and holds them in queue And there's one more thing I don't do like you I don't write like you And I never will Ain't even gonna TRY to fill your shoes With feet that walk over hot burning coals My word folds in the crook of elbows Hidden from hands that grab for peacock feathered pens Scriptures written in calligraphy’s Zen Yes ….. Delightfully different are we Though tight as cornrows … the closest of kin
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I was accused of "Playing With Words" instead of trying to MASTER them -- *sigh*
Okay, so I'm a :':word juggler:': -- Circus Freak -- Love me or leave me ........ alone!!!
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
3. "RE: Dearest Cousin ... (((De~Light~Fully Different)))" In response to Reply # 0
I have always felt like words come through me and I write them down... they have no master. As I hinted on Unc Climax's piece, when you sound didactic, you be preachin', not writin' poetry, which is a purer, more humble endeavor...
11. "RE: Dearest Cousin ... (((De~Light~Fully Different)))" In response to Reply # 3
You know ... I had to look up the word didactic, right? ...
di·dac·tic
Intended to instruct. Morally instructive. Inclined to teach or moralize excessively.
Thanks "G" -- One way or the other ... you're always "teaching" me! -- *smiles*
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
6. "RE: Dearest Cousin ... (((De~Light~Fully Different)))" In response to Reply # 0
this hit home for me so hard. my sister is why i ever began putting pen to paper. when she writes she gives lyrical orgasms....and even that's not adequate.
loved the piece!!!!
The future Mrs. of a KING...the mother of a PRINCE and a PRINCESS.
My cousin is in Washington (State) -- But you can holla at her long distance I guess --
She's prolly too old for you anyways tho babycakes -- *hehehe*
*Pinches Those Cute Baby Cheeks*
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A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
ahem my sentiments exactly Miracle Ric gotta see some of her work if you Photo givin props n drops like dat where she at? besides you set the stage for a collab can that happen? contrast parrallels opposites whatever make it happen sweetest sensation that u b...
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
>gotta see some of her work if you Photo givin props n drops like dat where she at? >besides you set the stage for a collab can that happen?
My cuzzin thinks the Internet ... Used in a forum such as ^this^ ... is wack.
The ONLY thing she uses the Net for is research, nahmean?
As far as she's concerned, what "we" do here ... is a waste of time -- *sigh* -- (She takes her art / her life / verrrry seriously) --
(((Oh Well)))
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
12. "RE: Dearest Cousin ... (((De~Light~Fully Different)))" In response to Reply # 0
word, I appreciate the conveyed message u delivered . . ya know it's nice to agree to disagree and be different still able to respect each other's differences, dig it!!!!
they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY -Rakim
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
>you should do the same poem over recognizing the similarities ...
I just "might" try that! -- -- (Thanx 4 the suggestion)
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
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