when midnight leaves me lonely today gets all up in my face beggin me to live for him and tomorrows such a flake he may not show up again but today's so unpredictable never know what he'll do next could end up in disaster or some beautiful sex and time wont stop callin but he keeps switching sides healed me when i had fallen was an ex lover of mine but he kept running out on me i could never go back that's when i got stuck on this dude named past some times i think i miss his yellin from a distance "you can't run forever, i'll catch up someday" you would thought i owed him money cuz he said i gotta pay but i'm still learnin from him still find myself yearnin for him when midnight leaves me lonely
2. "RE: When Midnight Leaves Me Lonely" In response to Reply # 0
This piece is knockin at my door, standing in my footsteps..... Thanks.
I expect to pass through life but once. if, therefore, there be any kindness I can show, or any good thing I can do to any fellow being, let me do it now, for I shall not pass this way again. William Penn 1644-1718 JAHLOVALL
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
8. "you did a really clever thing w/ the rhyme scheme and word" In response to Reply # 0
usage above...
but he keeps switching sides healed me when i had fallen was an ex lover of mine but he kept running out on me i could never go back that's when i got stuck on this dude named past some times i think i miss his yellin from a distance "you can't run forever, i'll catch up someday" you would thought i owed him money cuz he said i gotta pay but i'm still learnin from him still find myself yearnin for him when midnight leaves me lonely
made me want to try my hand at writing in rhyme again... i liked this. i didn't want to see it fall. peace~
9. "RE: When Midnight Leaves Me Lonely" In response to Reply # 0
very intelligent and even very real there is nothing more inspiring than to have fresh talent with fresh concepts that work and reach and teach hearts how to think
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
11. "RE: When Midnight Leaves Me Lonely" In response to Reply # 0
You had me hooked from the title alone... the title by itself is a work of poetry... and your content exceeded my greatest expectations that was setup by the title.
that's the measure of meaningful work.
"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession." - Robert Frost
12. "RE: When Midnight Leaves Me Lonely (explained)" In response to Reply # 11
When i wrote it i feared it wouldn't make any sense, but reading over the comments i was supprised at how relatable it's seems to be. I appriciate the feed back so much. i literally just took every saying about time i could think of and strung them together in a way that represented some of the real and fictional relationships i've had in my short life. Midnight is the poverbial relationship that eventually grows tierd of you and leaves you lonely, unsatisfied, and longing for what used to be. today, tomorrow, and time can be desribed as the admirers that you're sure aren't what you want or need. And Past is that one Ex boyfriend that every girl has. He's totally wrong for you yet he still has that something that makes you forget all the agruements and you done me wrongs and keeps you comming back.