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AfternoonDelight
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Tue Apr-08-08 07:00 AM

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"His & Hers THE AFFAIR"


          

His Story
Her Understanding

His Situation
Her Patience

His Schedule
Her Lonliness

His Seduction
Her Emotion

He Can't Commit
But He's Having His Cake...

and Eating Her Too!

  

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RE: His & Hers THE AFFAIR
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RE: His & Hers THE AFFAIR
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RE: His & Hers THE AFFAIR
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ASIEM
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Tue Apr-08-08 10:40 AM

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1. "RE: His & Hers THE AFFAIR"
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Their story
so simple
so complex
so true

a scribe has written and captured another moment

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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AfternoonDelight
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Tue Apr-08-08 04:39 PM

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Yes, you feel me, and Thanks too!

  

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ThaAnthology
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Wed Apr-09-08 08:11 AM

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very nice!

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Nowachaoticthing
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Sun Apr-13-08 12:15 PM

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4. "RE: His & Hers THE AFFAIR"
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Nicely done. I like the minimal use of verbage to describe such a complex, emotional situation.


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PhotoSynthesis
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Sun Apr-13-08 10:56 PM

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Nice tidbit of emotional angst - *Delicious*





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