To Whom Does It Belong?

That first Glance
to whom does it belong?
That first Kiss
to whom does it belong?
That first Sensuous Touch
giving rise to feelings of passions
releasing desired longings like
running wild in a field-
Oh the seduction.
Joining in the existence of being one
we share an 'erotic drive' with 'a throbbing force'.
Delving into a lust of mystic pleasures,
unexplored darkness, a room of flowing moisture,
an aroma of tantalizing sweetness.
your only escape
that moan of completion
but to whom does it belong?

Whowie it belong to me he he j/k whowie good piece, peace!

Purple is universal with word flow!

Thanks that means a lot. Been looking for a place to share the ink emotions.

and didn't flow nearly as well as the following lines:

we share an 'erotic drive' with 'a throbbing force'.
Delving into a lust of mystic pleasures,
unexplored darkness, a room of flowing moisture,
an aroma of tantalizing sweetness.
your only escape
that moan of completion
but to whom does it belong?

i think you did a good job above. the poem engages the senses and is a smooth, sensual piece. nice. Peace~

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And I've read her work in person... This is why I wanted her on the site, #1. So others beside me can see this great work, but also for critiquing. I ain't the most qualified. (but you are the woman. lol)tight!

BTW I'm tryna help her put this stuff in a book... any suggestions?

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Tha Anthology (Words 2001-2003) Poetry inspired by OKP and Wash, DC
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I'd love to see "your" answer to: To Whom Does It Belong -- poetically written -- cuz I really enjoyed reading this lil' flow -- (IT JUST BEGS TO BE ANSWERED, NAHMEAN?)--

Lookin' 4~ward to seeing more of your ish.


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if you gave me the phone
but i took the pictures
who does it belong to?

if i wrote it
but it's you web site
who does it belong to?

if i produce it songs
beats manga heat and posted on my space
who does it belong to?

death belongs to who ever claims it
so go ahead and bring it
the final chapter of your life's spit
jacob hit
god and survived so i shit
on you and you fail threw swallow by the pit
fuck trying to fit
between her lips skit
and lit pew perfume moby spew tit
ty milk for babes
and it shows they where illegit
no child of god would have laid lie kit
and hassle hoff bastante
i had enough
now i'm about to get rough
calling ing heavy duty artiliry
bush and me
who would think of it
bring down hip hop forever yours
step back and watch it pour

lick it trick it stick where only the dogs bark at holes

who does it belong to

if you hack it my computer
late night car jacking my tire
retire vents

who does it really belong to
when i catch you
a flying daggers i'm coming after
yo hummer click
presidentail stock cade
blocks paid
but i have 2 degrees to starvation
and still rize above the nation
of music
now you want me too kool it
you blew it
aggressive aggresstion

who owns this ass whipping speak
or lat the pussy leak!