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mindful
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"work haikus: ritualistic & confined"


  

          

i've taken to writing haikus about my job and the recent changes and b.s. that's going on around "these parts." they're actually helping me to deal with my "still being here."

Ritualistic

day in day out, it
never seems to change, how odd
that this is my life.

Confined

Cubicles were meant
to hold the insane. I’m not
crazy folks, not yet.

©Tremaine L. Loadholt


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you have to be humble when
you're dealing with God ©jill scott

  

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RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined
Dec 28th 2007
1
work haikus continued| fueled fire & indifference
Dec 31st 2007
2
work haikus continued| Almost Lunchtime & Suspicion
Jan 02nd 2008
3
Indifferent and Chipotle Tacos
Jan 02nd 2008
4
:) i love these nm
Jan 02nd 2008
5
work haikus cont'd|Indistinct & Tunes to get By
Jan 08th 2008
6
:) babe we are two birds sharing the same feather quill
Jan 08th 2008
7
i knew you could relate
Jan 08th 2008
8
      RE: i knew you could relate
Jan 09th 2008
9
work haikus cont'd|Unlearned & Job Security
Jan 09th 2008
10
LOL, nice
Jan 09th 2008
11
      i truly like Venus :)|work haikus cont'd
Jan 11th 2008
12
      RE: LOL, nice
Mar 13th 2008
38
work haikus cont'd|affair & set me free
Jan 27th 2008
13
He's home
Jan 28th 2008
14
*bumps up* i'm diggin'these
Jan 29th 2008
15
RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined
Jan 30th 2008
16
i really like the 1st two
Jan 30th 2008
17
awesome.
Feb 04th 2008
18
RE: cursed 4 life?
Feb 05th 2008
19
RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined
Feb 06th 2008
20
RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined
Feb 06th 2008
21
work haikus: disappointed & sunligh
Feb 08th 2008
22
RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined
Feb 08th 2008
23
Hope, Imperfection, Hope part 2, Faith
Feb 12th 2008
24
Annual review >times two<
Feb 12th 2008
25
just give me a check is right
Feb 15th 2008
26
RE: failing christian crusade
Feb 18th 2008
27
failing christian crusade
Feb 20th 2008
30
RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined
Feb 19th 2008
28
goodbye sunlight & the idiot bunch
Feb 20th 2008
29
RE: Haikus
Feb 21st 2008
31
RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined
Feb 26th 2008
32
RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined
Feb 26th 2008
33
RE: photo it's always goo 2 see u
Mar 01st 2008
34
RE: photo it's always goo 2 see u
Mar 01st 2008
36
thanks lady
Mar 01st 2008
35
RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined
Mar 12th 2008
37
RE: job lost
Mar 14th 2008
39
Why I Am Currently Unemployed
Mar 17th 2008
40
      ha. doesn't it sting though? God, I think I'm stuck nm
Mar 18th 2008
42
yup most def can relate to this one
Mar 17th 2008
41
work haikus cont'd| stuck & loyalty
Mar 18th 2008
43
RE: work haikus cont'd| stuck & loyalty
Mar 19th 2008
44
RE: it's alive
Apr 01st 2008
45
RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined
Apr 28th 2008
46

ASIEM
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1. "RE: work haikus: ritualistic &amp; confined"
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Fri Dec-28-07 11:24 AM by ASIEM

  

          

real life real people real situations
lmao @ just how real funny this is when able to see it outside of self
u dropped another bomb

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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2. "work haikus continued| fueled fire & indifference"
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Fueled fire

it’s New Year’s Eve, and
where am I? At work, of course,
slaving for the man.

Indifference

Trapped, corporate world slaves
on a new plantation, this
almost makes me cry.

©Tremaine L. Loadholt


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you're dealing with God ©jill scott

  

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3. "work haikus continued| Almost Lunchtime &amp; Suspicion"
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Wed Jan-02-08 01:36 PM by mindful

  

          

Almost lunchtime

It’s nearly lunchtime,
most of the day is gone, and
I can’t wait to leave.

Suspicion

Curious are the
trees swaying leafless to and
fro, questioning me.

©Tremaine L. Loadholt

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I've never considered myself
to be beautiful, and I still don't ©pam grier

no hate in '08

  

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4. "Indifferent and Chipotle Tacos"
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*Indifferent*

Do I really care
No - So keep your overtime
My sons pay me well

*Chipotle Tacos*

Chipotle Tacos
Soft and with guacamole
You're my concubine

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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5. ":) i love these nm"
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6. "work haikus cont'd|Indistinct &amp; Tunes to get By"
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Tue Jan-08-08 10:46 AM by mindful

  

          

Indistinct

The naked trees smile
whispering to each other,
“she’s at work again."

Tunes to get By

Al Green shouts “Love and
Happiness” as I drift off
into a new world.

©Tremaine L. Loadholt


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I've never considered myself
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7. ":) babe we are two birds sharing the same feather quill"
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I want to drop out
sit on a mountain and hear
the music of life

  

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8. "i knew you could relate"
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lol... these are getting me through man, seriously...

and your contribution, i love it hope your days get easier there.

  

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9. "RE: i knew you could relate"
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okay so you thought
i could not relate to tired
just cause i don't work

well let me say this
unemployed i might be
but lazy i aint

this 5 7 5
play on words is enuff work
to keep me busy

now haiku to sleep
haiku at work and tell me
later what you think

thanks for lettin me
have fun creatin poems
to make people think

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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10. "work haikus cont'd|Unlearned & Job Security"
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Unlearned

correcting errors
for the same mistakes could be
the death of me, *groans*

job security

one thing is certain,
my job is secure, because
no one seems to learn.

©Tremaine L. Loadholt

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I've never considered myself
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no hate in '08

  

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11. "LOL, nice"
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New Era

I am quite obsessed
With diverse caps for my dome
I'm stylin on you


Venus

Hard to understand
Why those heavenly bodies
Disrupt my orbit

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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12. "i truly like Venus :)|work haikus cont'd"
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financial complaints

it's friday again,
i worked overtime to get
nothing but pennies.


the savior

another weekend's
here to pull me from the tight
grip of work's sharp fangs.

©Tremaine L. Loadholt


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you are the meaning of everything
beautiful, i can't wait to breathe
your air. ©ledisi

no hate in '08

  

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38. "RE: LOL, nice"
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Thu Mar-13-08 12:45 PM by Euphoric Mutiny

  

          

>New Era
>
>I am quite obsessed
>With diverse caps for my dome
>I'm stylin on you
>
>
>Venus
>
>Hard to understand
>Why those heavenly bodies
>Disrupt my orbit
>
>


this reminds me of when,

Sun makes a smile that spreads sky’s width

Sprinkling dangling colours and

Angling them aptly where

The world will notice and thank Him,

Leaves my brooding to meander

And go over the mountain

Where Sun took the whole day to arrive, only to hide...

But he’s alright, he’s not angry, merely

Dancing with Sky, romancing her to night,

placing on her breast diamond moods that rightly alter sight...



I "saw" this after i came 4rm wrk though,
no matter how much they glorify it as a struggle
this "grind" just aint worth it....

pictures like this in my mind keep me focused on what's true...
i like that...

*Thank u*




















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for I hath brought;
messages of divine thought-

-settled in a room full of grass tinged smoke- April 13 '07

To my sense I dedicate your scrutiny...

  

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13. "work haikus cont'd|affair & set me free"
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Sun Jan-27-08 05:11 PM by mindful

  

          

affair

sought out someone else,
because i've grown tired of
struggling with you.

set me free

this life, keeps me chained.
i want so badly to leave,
you won't let me go.

©Tremaine L. Loadholt



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What is without periods
of rest will not endure. ©Ovid

  

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14. "He's home"
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I really missed you
We were closer as children
Still, time quells no blood

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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15. "*bumps up* i'm diggin'these"
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<--really!,have one--


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16. "RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined"
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statement death snow sway
paper flow no family calls
we bear love sin nurse

strained 2 usher life
mountians of polar caps kiss
peace slides watery heart

it's thawing fires
comfort care throw another
round of goats milk rest

at last the toxic
water consumes gift of g-d's
pain beat box stop talk

TE-TE
The End - To Everybody

  

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17. "i really like the 1st two"
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you "haiku" rather well.

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18. "awesome."
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~underneath it all~

  

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19. "RE: cursed 4 life?"
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yes rocked between thumb
cotton spikes slavery strikes sun
black clouds bleeding green

never seen before
laws kindle lost choice paper
on the back of earth

working a 9 2
5 2 be rich spooning a
deeper dish scoop souls

Freeworld Order
Dangurus Mines

  

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20. "RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined"
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the days are grayer
i'm more than what i've become
yet i await death

"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

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21. "RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined"
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on a wooden chair
don't you feel it coming how where?
nature will carry

hey your good but you ain't that good
touching strokes as finger tips glide across wanding path
catch a laugh and let go the stress

"ki"

peace it's me!
dumb ass

  

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22. "work haikus: disappointed & sunligh"
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Disappointed

Interviewing for life,
I’m back to the drawing board,
trying to save me.


Sunlight

The view near my desk
is what keeps me happy. I
thank GOD for sunlight.

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23. "RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined"
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Confined

Cubicles were meant
to hold the insane. I’m not
crazy folks, not yet.


ha!.....don't u know it...kima

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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24. "Hope, Imperfection, Hope part 2, Faith"
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**Hope**
God, I hope to be
A vessel for your glory
Even when I sin

**Imperfection**
I do fall often
Though my flesh, dense with leaven
Allows me to rise

**Hope (part 2)**
Maybe, after all
The blind night will free the sky
Now my heart sees dawn

**Faith**
Faith is breathing air
Unseen, and yet known as fact
So take a deep breath

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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25. "Annual review >times two<"
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WHITE MAN, I CARES NOT
YOU ARE NO KING OVER ME
JUST GIVE ME MY CHECK

***********************

But all jokes aside
I'm what's hot in the aisles
What's up with my raise

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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26. "just give me a check is right"
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dude, and i had THE worst day today at work... *sighs*

these folks don't deserve me. lol... seriously. i'm digging the haikus. keep 'em comin'

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27. "RE: failing christian crusade"
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fast track stress central
squeeze sauce meat sardines lunch break
no time 2 run out

death of paper pen
2 serial number lines wait
2 be taken care

of!

  

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30. "failing christian crusade"
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is a dope title...

i like the first haiku in that short series.

definitely digable *nods*

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28. "RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined"
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the boss is away
all this bandwidth for me
subways, eat fresh



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29. "goodbye sunlight & the idiot bunch"
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goodbye sunlight

sunlight is no more
our department has moved and
darkness covers me.

the idiot bunch

yes and no answers
are not for idiots, they
need to be spoon-fed.

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31. "RE: Haikus"
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Haikus are jewels if written with exceptional thought and youve showed that.

  

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32. "RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined"
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no respect sit down
vapors cause armpit stains dirt
thrown sustain crown jam

don't look find wisdom
elephant trunks jungle load
unload baby head

first delivery- use skills to see the seen
and become empty to draw lines around phantom atoms!

TE-TE
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33. "RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined"
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If my memory serves me correctly, your writing has "always" been therapeutic -- to the reader -- as well as for yourself --

From what I can see, you've mastered the art of haikus with wit, wisdom & humor -- and I appreciate that!


*Carry On*


P.S. Hopefully things will get better @ work ...


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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34. "RE: photo it's always goo 2 see u"
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behind wilt flowers
sunlight shows shadows 2
dark 2 see stand up

haven't seen you around but every now and then i catch
a glimpse of natures best assets

pull down the curtains next time if you don't want 2 be
caught

miss you
well halfway true
i miss what you do for the boards
it's like a 100 year old birthday
for a man who can't blow

hope to bump into you later
over and out!
peace one love

Te-Te

oh yeah did you catch my videos
on myspace before i deleted them
if not pinch your tits and wake the fuck up

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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36. "RE: photo it's always goo 2 see u"
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You're a sweetheart freedom -- -- But no, I didn't see your deleted myspace videos ...


*Tits Pinched* -- I'm awake now! --




A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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mindful
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35. "thanks lady"
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i've gotta interview on monday and another meeting with another facility. so, i may have something new to write about later

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start living...

  

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Shakeet Lokh Em
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37. "RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined"
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I took a day off
For that Verizon FIOS
Hooky On Demand

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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freedomfighter
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39. "RE: job lost"
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where it came money
children picking earth's ice dose
outfitted hip hop

most 2 lazy
mountians peaks 2 punches
no time 2 clock couch

i can't speak no job
volcano's preparing leaps
bond cutting down tree

cure 2 jealousy
going against nature rape
we it's just me free

employee at will
iron mine why can't i find
a temple 2 rest

2 bless 2 go 2
church my own ambitions comes
first unhog tie thirst

  

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40. "Why I Am Currently Unemployed"
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brick and mortar stores
are not as fast as downloads
bye, record store job...

-----
"You Sensitive Bastard", Rob Sturma's latest book of poems, is available directly from the author. It's a pretty book with a real ISBN number and everything.

www.myspace.com/robsturma

  

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mindful
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42. "ha. doesn't it sting though? God, I think I'm stuck nm"
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http://clutchmagonline.com/forums

the search for peace is a long
and tedious journey. be prepared.

  

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41. "yup most def can relate to this one"
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loved the angle of the cubicle part!




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www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html

  

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43. "work haikus cont'd| stuck & loyalty"
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stuck

i've searched for so long,
though complacency is safe,
i still yearn for change.


loyalty

i'm as loyal as
they pay me to be. who cares
about me? no one.

©Tremaine L. Loadholt




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http://clutchmagonline.com/forums

the search for peace is a long
and tedious journey. be prepared.

  

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freedomfighter
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44. "RE: work haikus cont'd| stuck & loyalty"
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only 4 minutes
seasonal time off return
desk pack up retired

  

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tonka truck
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45. "RE: it's alive"
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no C.P.R
air hard compressing liver
bottom of bag rush

found still intact dust
off bee's stinger line up TB
cough tele floor nurse

back in action again
who let the devil in hell
is only 4 saints

get out and slam the door behind you because i'm smoking!

TE-TE
The End - To Everybody

  

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46. "RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined"
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hooked real pull give slack
earth expell all one needs birth pang
first you must learn rest

clocks don't keep records
how many grains sand dooms blocks
water tracks then leap in

Freeworld Order
Dangurus Mines

  

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