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freedomfighter
Member since Apr 03rd 2003
1942 posts
Tue Dec-11-07 02:50 AM

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"u want me z"


  

          

one two
many horsemens
can't mask godzilla's merril
lynch lashes of paris becomes
romo sackless bruam's
ice kiss

soft in
tent crime revolves
revolvers hack so phallangies
stagnat pepper
un crush

tro jans
put them back in purse
lips of concrete morbidities
vanquish easy
used air

drain o
2 hornets gasp
wit a sightful of honey
oats pulops gross
fail skuzzy


  

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RE: u want me z
Dec 12th 2007
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original
Dec 12th 2007
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tonka truck
Member since Feb 10th 2005
691 posts
Wed Dec-12-07 03:12 AM

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1. "RE: u want me z"
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Wed Dec-12-07 03:14 AM by tonka truck

          

Name Replying To: Cypher This Up (UndergroundHipHop.com MC Board)
posted 12/12/2007 3:11:57 AM ET
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magic piss jump'n out bottle
words begin to mingle straddle
across 2 four by fours tingling x-mas fabbles
spoon fed with symbols
of constant king call me lord emblems
of life problems rejecting
ess cables connect horse and buggy
2 my sol pulling moon closer 2 sun
and once geometry numbers meet done
becomes rewrites bumper cars polite
manic fight for supreme balance
and test anwers question
the plot of dots
on verticle axis rotate scenes of roiting
corps walking on dandy lion fields
of illusionary hail
is where i dwell
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TE-TE
The End - To Everybody

you know the drill boards wouldn't accept
fly paper approve

  

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Damali
Member since Sep 12th 2002
35865 posts
Wed Dec-12-07 09:07 AM

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2. "original"
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i love the visual structure. it's like sideways skyscrapers. the wordplay is fun,although alot i did not understand. this sounds like a love poem but i'm not sure. reminds me of a Camp Lo verse.

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