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The Hour Glass
Member since Nov 22nd 2004
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Fri Nov-09-07 03:29 PM

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"i am living my dreams today (the circle of life)"


          

(i found my voice and)

choices unspoken

i'm living my dreams todayyyyy

response was all broken

really it don't matter

..

devices just splattered

all over my shadows

...

i'm crying for help

giz stained on my ego

unlifted my spirits

placebo'd my ego.

i'm perfect

perfectly unaffectionate.

a science experiment

depressed in books of major thought

deepened desires un seen

believe it i've seen it.

Lying underneath unspoken passion

fantasys' reach their limits.

hours of dreaming time unspent.

weve seen it before but lets relent.

re-penting the first side of list

repeatedly repeating flailing mountains deceiving.

drugs take over animate my desires.

type and i think

think as i type

turn the volume down

on self hatred and strife.

bring love to my bredren

sex bed-ly receptive

choke him in the sea of mine eyes

now repeat.

bring love to my bredren

sex bed-ly receptive

choke him in the sea of mine eyes

now repeat.

(c) Graciousssth



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up for the ending lines and...
Nov 11th 2007
1
yeah, i was all over the place, lol.
Nov 12th 2007
2

mindful
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Sun Nov-11-07 12:05 PM

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1. "up for the ending lines and..."
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this:

i'm crying for help

giz stained on my ego

unlifted my spirits

placebo'd my ego.

i'm perfect

perfectly unaffectionate.

a science experiment

depressed in books of major thought

deepened desires un seen

believe it i've seen it.


Peace~

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http://msmind.wordpress.com
http://www.clutchmagazine.com

*peaceful*

  

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The Hour Glass
Member since Nov 22nd 2004
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Mon Nov-12-07 12:39 AM

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2. "yeah, i was all over the place, lol."
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But that's what i wrote over a carib rhythm.

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http://tinyurl.com/yqofov

  

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