1. "i don' t know about this one" In response to Reply # 0
it isn't as potent as others i've read from you (but, all writings are different, aren't they?). i like the concept and the soothing tone to the poem, but it wasn't what i expected from you, i guess. what prompted the change?
2. "RE: i don' t know about this one" In response to Reply # 1
I know i was saying the same thing as i was reading but then i also thought how creative your writing is cause this had to have been another side of you i have yet to notice. very serene feel to this
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder